Calligraphy

I’m fine really mmm I don't think this line contributes. Judgments rhyme This line is really bla. It needs something. More words (maybe), because it is really short compared to ...

I agree with everything Snoink said. She stole my whole review! It means I will fight for you, die for you, and never live without you. As for content, yes ...

General comments: Blue is grammar. Love's leaving us. I don't know why, You contradicted yourself. At first you said that you didn't know why, but then the rest of the ...

This poem is really good, though, like all writing, it can be improved. The first thing I noticed when reading this poem was the short lines. Someone once told me ...

Shall I throw pennies in a well, making magic wishes? or shall I toss my dreams , I only add this comma because you had one before. I made the ...

the silent tears drip down my face When tears drip it means they are falling off. But, you are talking about when tears run down your face not drip off. ...

A spiral of bone, turning in on itself over and over again, I don't like this line I already was picturing it that way and tons of people saw this. ...

Once again, I don't want to see the smiley face at the end of your poem (if it is part of the poem.). Nor, the font color. I liked this ...

O.K. so first of all I will feel really harsh reviewing this because it is about your Grandma and from the heart. Second of all I would get rid of ...

O.K. so, I like the second drawing best because it is kind of my style of drawing. But, I think you should lightly shade in the branches behind the leaves ...

I really like this poem, but the way it seems now just seems choppy. The rhythm isn't strengthen by the short lines at all. I know I am pushing my ...

Hi flower, I will be your reviewer today. I am a bit nervous because well you have the reviewer badge and all and you are a much better reviewer than ...

You lifted me up towards the sky. Pure light healing me, I am not sure what this has to do with the poem. I am confused about its meaning. Gently ...

Hey guys, I haven't posted here in quite a while, and I haven't had a chance to write much. Recently I've become interested in poetry, and this is one of ...

O.K. I really can't help you much with this poem because it is like AWESOME, but I will try. :D Twirl with me in the depths of a star lit ...