Cailey

Hello! Nive job, I like all the comparison of Jesus as a superhero. Hands down, he's my favorite superhero too! :) As for reviewing, I think there are a lot ...

Lovely!! I wish I knew more about Albania, since I couldn't even picture the country when I read this. :/ And I wish I knew more about who the "you" ...

Hey there! Okay, so I don't think my review will be as long as the other two that got here first. It probably won't be as indepth either. However, I ...

Alright, so first of all I think you should write a story. I read this and couldn't quite bring myself to love it as a poem, but I think it ...

It was interesting. :) I like how the reader can kind of guess and interpret for themselves whether this is about an actual star or a metaphorical one. I like ...

Hm, I like this. I was drawn in by the title, which made me imensely curious. (I spelled that wrong. Hm. Immensly? Well, very curious.) Then, I was kind of ...

Hey there! I'm here to review for you. :) I pasted the whole poem below here, and put my comments in parenthesis. So, hopefully you can figure it out. Overall, ...

This was great. I like the idea of a poem about poetry. I wouldn't consider this a fantastic piece, it seems like you were just playing around with ideas. I ...

Hey Demoness, I'm not great at giving reviews, as I tend to just love most of the stuff I read. Such as this. I love all the detail and imagery ...

This was really good, you had a cool way of making it all sound so monotonous, and yet there was emotion and detail and enough feeling to interest the reader. ...

I love the message of this poem and the idea of it. I also like the flow of it, it sounds very musical and pretty. I suggest you separate it ...

I liked this, it was simple and almost plain, but it conveyed the emotion, the sense of not being good enough, and then at the same time the knowledge that ...

Wow, this was very powerful. Though you never expressly state anything about the history of this poem- it showed up through the words. I think this could have some more ...

Your title hooked me, so I had to read this. I'll admit I was expecting some more humor, which didn't come. However, I did like this- although I wasn't completely ...

Wow, this was really good. I'm impressed, and I enjoyed the thoughtfulness that came though every line of the poem. I wish I could give a more in depth review, ...