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Cailey

Cailey

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The Whisperer's Story

    So, I didn't mean to actually read this, but as soon as I started I couldn't stop. And that is definitely a compliment! Maybe you've edited this since the last ...

    Jul 29, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Soldier On

    Hey Dream4Ever! Happy Christmas in July!! I'm here for a review. I didn't read the reviews already here, so hopefully I don't just repeat what they said. If I do, ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: A letter to the ones I left behind.

    Wow. I really do love this. It's so simple and captivating and, I'm not sure what word I'm looking for here. Not sad, just, peaceful maybe? Anyway, I had one ...

    Jul 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Two Halves

    Hey there, Cailey here for a review. I really like the idea of this. I like the metaphor of a half and two halves joining to make a whole. It's ...

    Jul 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Forever & Always

    Hey there, Cailey here to review for you. I haven't reviewed anything in ages, so hopefully everything comes out the way I mean it to. :) I liked your piece ...

    Jul 9, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Nostalgia (Childhood)

    My YWS homepage told me to review this. So, since I knew your name and I like you, I decided I might as well. Besides, I like feeling nostalgic about ...

    Apr 29, 2013
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Romantic Re: I Am Here

    Hey there, CaiJo here for a review. :D Alright, so I am not the most musical person in the world, although I do love music, but anyway, I was more ...

    Mar 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Love Is Like Math

    Alright, it's been a while since I've done a review, I suppose you get the honor of my first review since review day. :D First off, I like the title; ...

    Mar 19, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Birthday girl

    Hey there, Cailey here for the reviewing. I like this. It's short and sweet and makes me feel happy. However, I wish I had more. Not necessarily longer, but deeper. ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hopes for La La Land

    Hey there, Cailey here for a review. I like this, although I feel like the point was rather vague. However, since this is poetry I think it's meant to be ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Script » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Forbidden

    hey there, Cailey here for a review. Okay, overall interesting plot. It isn't every day that werewolves and angels are combined. I kind of like it. My main criticism of ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Prologue

    Hey there, Cailey here for a review. So, this is interesting. I think you have a nice concept here, but I feel like there's something missing. I don't exactly know ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Humor, Theatre Re: Fear and soul

    Hey there, Cailey here with a review. Okay, I don't get it. What is this? Incomplete? Problem with posting? Because this can't be the entire piece. If you do have ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sick Pet Turtles

    Hey there, Cailey here with a review! Okay, so I like this, it's cute and simple and lovely. As for reviewing: There are a few places where I think your ...

    Feb 24, 2013
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Burn

    Hey there, Cailey here for a review. :) Okay, so before anything, the main problem I found here was grammar and typos. There are places where you don't have spaces, ...

    Feb 24, 2013


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