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Re: The Whisperer's Story
So, I didn't mean to actually read this, but as soon as I started I couldn't stop. And that is definitely a compliment! Maybe you've edited this since the last ...
Jul 29, 2013 -
Re: Soldier On
Hey Dream4Ever! Happy Christmas in July!! I'm here for a review. I didn't read the reviews already here, so hopefully I don't just repeat what they said. If I do, ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: A letter to the ones I left behind.
Wow. I really do love this. It's so simple and captivating and, I'm not sure what word I'm looking for here. Not sad, just, peaceful maybe? Anyway, I had one ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: Two Halves
Hey there, Cailey here for a review. I really like the idea of this. I like the metaphor of a half and two halves joining to make a whole. It's ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Forever & Always
Hey there, Cailey here to review for you. I haven't reviewed anything in ages, so hopefully everything comes out the way I mean it to. :) I liked your piece ...
Jul 9, 2013 -
Re: Nostalgia (Childhood)
My YWS homepage told me to review this. So, since I knew your name and I like you, I decided I might as well. Besides, I like feeling nostalgic about ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: I Am Here
Hey there, CaiJo here for a review. :D Alright, so I am not the most musical person in the world, although I do love music, but anyway, I was more ...
Mar 24, 2013 -
Re: Love Is Like Math
Alright, it's been a while since I've done a review, I suppose you get the honor of my first review since review day. :D First off, I like the title; ...
Mar 19, 2013 -
Re: Birthday girl
Hey there, Cailey here for the reviewing. I like this. It's short and sweet and makes me feel happy. However, I wish I had more. Not necessarily longer, but deeper. ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Hopes for La La Land
Hey there, Cailey here for a review. I like this, although I feel like the point was rather vague. However, since this is poetry I think it's meant to be ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: The Forbidden
hey there, Cailey here for a review. Okay, overall interesting plot. It isn't every day that werewolves and angels are combined. I kind of like it. My main criticism of ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Prologue
Hey there, Cailey here for a review. So, this is interesting. I think you have a nice concept here, but I feel like there's something missing. I don't exactly know ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Fear and soul
Hey there, Cailey here with a review. Okay, I don't get it. What is this? Incomplete? Problem with posting? Because this can't be the entire piece. If you do have ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Sick Pet Turtles
Hey there, Cailey here with a review! Okay, so I like this, it's cute and simple and lovely. As for reviewing: There are a few places where I think your ...
Feb 24, 2013 -
Re: Burn
Hey there, Cailey here for a review. :) Okay, so before anything, the main problem I found here was grammar and typos. There are places where you don't have spaces, ...
Feb 24, 2013
