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Hey there, Evens, Ita here to review. Nathanial had told her that hope was dangerous, that hope was a demon. Hope’s only purpose was to fill peoples' minds with ideas ...

Hey there, Ita here to review. I'll be doing this as I read, so bear with me. Firstly, that big introductory paragraph? It's an interesting hook, although it's pretty much ...

Hey there, Jitt. Ita here to review. I apologize, I haven't read the chapters leading up to this, so please keep in mind there might be some things that will ...

Hey there ww, Ita here to review chapter one. I reviewed chapter two first, and something just struck me now. The main character is a guy?! O.o I guess it's ...

Hey there, Ita to review. Well, after the initial shock of arrival, it seems Destiny has accustomed herself to the place. Perhaps a bit too quickly... there was either outside ...

Hey there, Ita here to review. Well, this is the 'steamiest' piece I've ever read on YWS, that's for sure. Unfortunately, it seems the actual setting isn't as important as ...

Hey ww! Ita here to review. I apologize, I couldn't find chapt 1, so some things may be off, I warn you. Let's begin. The start isn't much of a ...

Hey there, Ita here to review! I'll be doing this as I read, so please bear with me. Firstly, I'd like to comment on the format, which was a bit ...

Hey there, here to review, unasked for but hopefully not unwanted! xD Firstly, while you did explain why the font is so messed up, it's still very confusing. I had ...

Hey there Braden, Ita to review, unasked for but hopefully not unwanted! xD This is your first piece submitted, huh? Well, then I'll have the honor of being one of ...

Hey there, Alfonzo, here to review, uncalled for but hopefully not unwanted xP. This is by all means a good piece, a very good piece. I like the opening, however, ...

Hey there. Here to review this, though I'll be reviewing as I read, so bear with me. As Rydia noted, the title is pretty dull, but, I wish to add, ...

Hey Pix, here to review. I congratulate you for the interesting twist at the end, although I have some minor issues with this. All these faces were hard to encounter ...

Hey Alpha. Here to review, as promised. Firstly, I don't have to reiterate that I like where this is going. Secondly, I could spot no grammatical imperfections, so we're all ...

Hey there. Here to review, unasked for but hopefully not unwanted! ;P Your grammar structure is good, this I'll start out by saying. The piece doesn't really catch my eye ...