Caerulean

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: I wish I could go back to when I was a child, to when I felt at ease with this world. - This is a clich� ...

Hello, Sol! ^_^ :) First review! xD Nitpicks: I had feared my fears for so long, but ambivalence conquered my heart. - Nice lines. ^_^ I lost so much, yet ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: with sand under my tongue and waves breaking in my ears. - Nice imagery here. :) and say I’m happy here — - I think it's ...

Hello there :) Nitpicks: I wish I could just place you at my back, - It supposed to be 'on' and not 'at my back'. Pack all the moments and ...

Hi there. :) I'm confused by your spoiler. You don't want the reviewers to comment about punctuation or did you mean that you wouldn't mind comments about punctuation? o.o Anyway, ...

Hello there. :) First of all, the title is interesting but it seems unfitting for the poem 'cause the dancer's not the demon. Anyway... Nitpicks: At first it was a ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: Anything anyone does - I think there should be a comma after 'Anything'. No matter what happens. I'll love you forever. - It should be a ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: Alone, truely alone - 'truly' is not spelled with an 'e'. Tragically awaiting the nonexistant end - It's 'nonexistent'. Oh, immortal vexation - Since you seem ...

Hello. :) I've got only two nitpicks for you: I can fly But I'm not free - o.o I think the contradiction there is interesting. Anyway, this beginning feels quick. ...

Hello there. :) Nitpicks: All my efforts gone to waste, everything seems pointless. - I think it should be a period, a dash, or a semi-colon after 'waste'. I struggle ...

Hello there, Azila. :) Nitpicks: (one two three two one) - I think there should be commas in between the numbers. in a house by the river - I think ...

Hello there. :) This review isn't finished 'cause this short story is REALLY LONG lol. I'm just gonna make another review when I finish reading the story. Well, get read ...

Hello, tinkembell. ^_^ :) ♪♫ tinkembell, tinkembell, tinkem all the way~ ♫♪ Ehem. Nitpicks: In the silent darkness, that blanketed the night, - I think the comma after 'darkness' is ...

Hello there. ^_^ Congrats on the featured work! :smt023 Nitpicks: And, you always kept your promises. - You shouldn't put a comma after a coordinating conjunction when it begins the ...

Hello there. :) Congrats on the featured work. ^_^ Nitpicks: It is raining Steady and consistent I am alone Safe and consistent - Really good opening. ;) I lean back ...