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Re: Boromir
Happy Review Day! :) First of all, I'd like to say that I read this because of the title! :D Yes, *ahem* I am a LOTR fan. Anyway... You have ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Meet Yourself Coming
Happy Review Day, Cadi! :) Nitpicks: The first time I saw him, I was barely five, and he was an old, old man. - This is a very interesting opening. ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: Free At Last
Happy Review Day! :D Whisperer here~ The title is simply worded, which caught my interest, :) but a bit cliché though. I can't think of a better title though. Anyway, ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: the Poet writes as follows...
Hey there! Happy Review Day! :D This is my first one since so long so forgive me if this one fails. xD Anyway, this is interesting. :) It's not common ...
Dec 30, 2012 -
Re: My House of Cards
Hello there. ^_^ :) Whisperer here. Nitpicks: The wallpaper's filled with clubs and hearts, That make a certain kind of art. - I don't think there should be a comma ...
Sep 2, 2012 -
Re: A Whispered Lullaby
Hello there. :) I found the title interesting. xD Look at my username, and you'll know one of the reasons why. lol Another reason is that it gives a sense ...
Aug 6, 2012 -
Re: Woman, You Deserve More
Hello there. :) It's Whisperer here. First of all, the 'directness' of the title drew me into reading the poem. Anyway, here we go: The beauty in your eyes - ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Take Me Home
Hi, Scarlett~ :). Whisperer here. Anyway, I'm too lazy (or time-conscious) to read the other reviews right now so I might repeat some of the things they've already said. xD ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Pushing Through The Darkness
Hi there. :) Whisperer here. First of all, I'd like to say that this is so short. I don't know what you meant this to be. It seems to me ...
Jun 24, 2012 -
Re: Life is Unexpected
Hi there. :) It's Whisperer here. This is the first one that I've reviewed sing a long time ago (xD) so... I hope I make sense. lol Nitpicks: Life is ...
Apr 24, 2012 -
Re: Procrastination, Old Friend of Mine.
Hello, my dear sis. :) I haven't reviewed in a while, and so review shall I! Nitpicks: Like a criminal to the crime scene, - 'to' doesn't seem to be ...
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: Blind
Hello there! Whisperer here. :) That's a really nice poem! :) The imagery is nice and the meaning is great! The rhyming wasn't that great though but it was good. ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Falling Stars
Hello there. :) Honestly, I read this because the title is the same with David Archuleta's song. xD Anyway, I've got nitpicks for you: We walked through the trails in ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Troubled Sage and Sweet Caroline 0.3
Hello there. :) First review. ^_^ Nitpicks: I had used the balcony to climb up from when I got up there. - I'm not certain of how you can rewrite ...
Jul 31, 2011 -
Re: You Found Me
Sol, Sol, Sol, Sol! *tune of Beethoven's Symphony No. 5* xD :D I am here to give thee a review! Nitpicks: It was just sequences, figures and numbers, hypothesis and ...
Jul 3, 2011
