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Kyll! This is lovely. I'm not entirely sure if there's a purpose for the line breaks, but I would recommend reworking them (I wouldn't be surprised if I'm missing something ...

I'm going to ignore the cliche nature of this poem in all its angstiness -- I think that this is too general, and too demanding in its questions in order ...

Hi there! I thought this was nice the and the structure is quite nice. However, I think a lot of weakness lies in the very passive language. Phrases like, "many ...

This begins in a very interesting way and then immediately heads straight downhill. What goes from a interesting, fresh image soon degrades into useless generalizations and unspecific ideas. "Middle o

In the first stanza, the subjects and perspectives are confusing and a bit muddled. It's distracting as all hell. You have some really interesting imagery, especially "i swallow it like ...

Not really my cup of tea in topic or anything, but that's okay! However, I did have a big problem: there is very little that is actually emotionally engaging in ...

This has beautiful, fresh descriptions in it-- something I both strive for and absolutely admire in your writing. HOWEVER, at times, it is forced, it doesn't quite register at first, ...

Your poem is filled with generic and plain vocabulary. There is no specificity; there is nothing to envision. Frankly, there's nothing really of interest at all. I appreciate what you're ...

I can't tell if this is a joke or not...? Theme isn't working with the concept you're trying to push it through. The diction and weight that you're trying to ...

Cool concept! Unfortunately you managed to pick lines that are basically a bunch of cliches and offer very little to a poem. There are lots of songs out there that ...

Hi hi hi. So! There's lots of cool stuff in this and lots of not-so-cool stuff. I really, really like some of the things you've got going on here, but ...

Nooot crazy about the list structure. If you want to go through with it, develop your ideas, give it a sense of rote and mantra, as if this is a ...

Hey darlingface. You get my special review, as I said before. So I don't have much to say on this, I'm not like you and can't really pull out 5 ...

Hi! So haikus are odd things to review and I don't do em much but I have a couple of thoughts about this one all the same. First off, there ...

Hi there. First off, spelling -- I hate mentioning stuff like that but it was distracting. Secondly, did you mean to put "give the strong man help?" because that kind ...