Butterfinger

Hi-ya! I'll make this short and sweet! Love love love it! My favorite line: " I never knew hate had a body" Brilliant work!!!!

Hi-ya!!!! Love this poem!! Especially the last part " I've been there " Kind of eerie!

Hi-ya!!! It's so short and simple, that my mind over thinks it.....Not sure where it's going, but Brilliant!!!!

BAHAHAHA! I love this! It's fun to read it as fast as you can! Brilliant work!

I truly believe this is a Brilliant piece of poetry! Your word choice didn't feel forced at all even with the rhyme scheme. It read very smoothly and was very ...

Thank you for your comments! I'm horrible with punctuation for poetry! Thanks for the help!

Thank you for your comments!

I'm not really sure on how I feel about this poem. I like the flow of it, it reads smoothly. But I can't pull it together and get the meaning. ...

Bahahahahaha!!! Love this! Enough said! Brilliant!!!

Wow, I think you did a wonderful job! Very brilliantly wrote!!! The flow is nice and easy and your word choice makes it so simple yet amazing! Great work!

Nonononono NO WAY. You read it wrong. I was admitting that I've done it. Hmmm....After I re-read it, I can sort of seem what you mean...I guess... I can never ...

Wow! I love this song! It's so realistic and touching! Brilliant!

Ummm....That's not really a good thing. Blunt but I didn't feel anything.

I'm soooo excited for all the wonderful reviews I've gotten so far! Thanks all you guys! I just wish for the number of views I'd have as many reviews!

I absolutely love this!!! You keep saying you're no good at poetry, yet you spin out writing like this!!! Brilliant!! You're destined to be a great writer!!!!