Published May 22, 2011
Hello everyone! This is part of a song I wrote for my book "How We Rock". I've also created a lyric video for this song if you wanted to check that out as well: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s2dQ6i-7i0U Tell me what you think:)
Lyrics:
I've been locked in a tower
Nobody rescued me
I've been here for hours
Week after week
Another X on the calender
Same old, same old routine
I'm painting over this picture
I'm changing my scene
Let me out
On my way
I can't find my place
In this cage
This is not my fate
Need to get away
Chorus
I wanna fly
Spread my wings and go
I'll touch the sky
When I find the key to set me free
I wanna run
Kick the chains away
There's no better feeling than running on my two feet
Free
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Wow! I love this song! It's so realistic and touching! Brilliant!
Thank you guys for the reviews and feedback! It feels good to put yourself out there and get a great response:)
I really like these lyrics. I, myself, am a songwriter. The lyrics you have posted have a smooth, flowing rhythm inside it.
Keep it up. You are doing great
why did you say ( This Old, This Old dream)
Hey Cy!
This looks really good, I didn't really find any grammatical errors. Keep it up!
Hey its Giselle
This is really good, it have a great flow. Sorry if I didn't say much I'm kinda in a hurry ;P. Keep up the good work.
This was really cool sounding. It had a great flow and I kind of just wanted to sing along as I was reading it. The song was really pretty.
The only thing I disliked was how it kind of jumped all over the place from different topic to different topic. So, as great as it was if I was listening to this on the radio I'd have wanted to play it back to listen to the lyrics again.
I like how it ends, it's very releasing, very free indeed. Overall it was very nice.
Keep writing! I'd love to read another song by you.
Good luck,
TLM