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i really liked the poem...................................it was a fun to go through it.........................i have never read such poem before.......keep writing more.........
This was such a different poem! I have only one nitpick, and it's that you'd make nouns full sentences. examples:
or or (especially this one for me) It messes with the flow, in my opinion! Maybe no one else noticed that, but it bugged me... especially since you had "Strike out" as one sentence; I though things like, "Why couldn't he do that with 'begin again'?" But anyway, great work. This poem was really fun to read, and I liked it!I love this poem! It is so original. I really only have one nitpick. After every word you put a full stop aprt from one.
It could be like that on purpose or or maybe just a typo.
It is really fun to say fast. Anyway, Keep up the great writing!
Writer's Block!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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That's the first thing I thought of when I read this. I have never seen a poem like this before! A+ for originality.
Some critics would say this wouldn't even qualify for being called a poem, but who's to say, and who cares? I love this
No nitpicks from me, I can't even imagine a way to review this...
And it is fun to read fast XD
This is great! This is exactly how I feel when I can get NO ideas!
AWESOME AS ALWAYS! 
BAHAHAHA! I love this! It's fun to read it as fast as you can! Brilliant work!