Burrow

I just have to say congratulations on getting so far in this novel, a lot of people would have given up. I read your first few chapters and I loved ...

Wow!! Jack here for a short review. (I like poetry, but suck at reviewing it, though I couldn't resist for this one!) Well you start the reader of very confusingly, ...

I haven't read you other chapters, except the first one and I loved that so I just have to say what you have going here is a really good story. ...

Jack here for a review. I have to say I love your story idea. It has been used yes, but not really in this way, when you say only the ...

Jack here for a short review. Well I love your idea her, it reminds me of Rangers apprentice and how the rangers started of. Anyway I really love this, you ...

Jack here for a review. That was really short but it was wonderful. Your last five chapters was from the perspective of individuals, but you narrated this and I found ...

Jack here for a review. I first looked at this because you asked me to and because I need to review some stuff. I had a look how long this ...

Jack here for a review. Ok firstly I love you explanation at the beginning, it was very helpful to understand that was going on. Though maybe you should remind us ...

Jack here for a review. Wow that was a really long story essay, but I really enjoyed all of it. As book wolf said below, when I first saw it, ...

Jack here for a review. First of all this flowed really well and each world was placed extremely well. To correct me I'm not great with poetry, but not once ...

Man that was great, You rose a new side of birthdays. When I was young I always thought it was about the presents, though when I got older it was ...

Jack here for a review! Ok firstly I love this story, I read through all of it and loved it, there wasn't much for a review so I will just ...

Jack here for a review. Ok firstly you describe this story extremely well I can imagine the bedroom really well, then the pub I swear I can almost smell the ...

Hey gab Jack here for a review. Firstly though I haven't read it, this reminds me of fault in our stars. Next though I really enjoyed your still of writing ...

Ok firstly, I suggest split this up, I did read it but I found it extremely hard. If you want tog et your message out. You need to make it ...