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Re: Fantasticas: The Boy And His Staff
Jack here for a review. There really isn't much that I could fix considering how much you have edited it, and how many reviews you have received, but anyway I ...
Dec 31, 2014 -
Re: Humanities Curse
Jack here for a review on your lovely poem here. You have shown me a truly wonderful poem, I often say many poems are good, but that is how I ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: An Epistle to my Late Father
Jack here for a review. There isn't really anything I can fix here, I really loved tis, it rhymed well, it was full of emotion and meaning, and I loved ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: The Choice is Mine
Jack here for a review! I love this poem, I really see no fault in it, except maybe that you could have split it up instead of having one big ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Dreamer's Lament: Contest Edit
Jack here for a review on your lovely little poem here! I think your writing is something I want to look up to, you have written an intriguing piece, with ...
Dec 30, 2014 -
Re: Dragon Hunted (warning: may contain sheep)
Hello Jack here for a review. To start of I like the concept of this poem, it reminds me of how to train your dragon, which I wouldn't be surprised ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: The Illusion
Jack here for a review on your lovely poem. I don't really know what to say about your piece here, it is very interesting, and I am intrigued by what ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Superhero
Jack here for a review. Wow. I literally and speechless, I don't really know what do say, there is nothing to fix, it is beautiful, it made my day, it ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Twelve Days of Fading Love (A Collection of Haikus)
Jack here for a review. I am not very good at poems, so give me a break if this review sucks or isn't very helpful, but I just felt like ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Blackbird Singing Chapter 3
Jack here for a review on your lovely story! I read the last two chapters and really enjoyed them, so here I am to review this. This chapter I felt ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: i travelled the world thirteen times over
Why to people say, sorry this is a clumsy/bad poem and needs work, a.k.a is sucks, but then bam you read it and it is pure amazing stuff. WOW that ...
Dec 14, 2014 -
Re: Project: LOVE [Chapter 11 - Edited]
WOW finally some action, great job Esca! I love what you are going with here, I finally find my self enjoying it even more, I love how it is all ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: Late Night Text
That was a twisty and turn poem very much! Jack here for a review. Ok I love this, it really sent me on a twist and I was really interested ...
Dec 8, 2014 -
Re: Where is God When I Need Him?
Jack here for a review. I really liked this, and I just thought I would leave my thoughts behind on what you wrote here. I find it very interesting. I ...
Dec 8, 2014 -
Re: Departure Scene
Jack here for a review. I hope this helps, There isn't though much things I could see that really needed to be fixed so I will just point out a ...
Dec 8, 2014