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Jack

  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Insidious Chapter Four- The Present

    Can you write the next chapter please, I really wanna read it, Im not much for romantic books and all, but this one is good and it is interesting and ...

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Forgive

    That was a good poem and I am not just saying that, me personally really enjoyed it, I loved how you ended the stanzas and I loved the bit with ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The wealth we have in common

    That was a very good essay I think and I thought it had some really good points and I loved the Albus quote, that is an amazing quote. I like ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: I'd Only Wanted A Tissue

    I have to say I really enjoyed reading that and for something you say was written early in the morning it was amazing. I dont know I just enjoyed reading ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Hush Hush

    Hello This is a very nice poem, and there are some lovely words in it, but I really found it hard to understand what was fully going on. But everything ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Dragon's Doings

    I have to agree with you, it does make me feel like a dragon. This poem really flowed well and it is one of the first fantasy poems that I ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Teen Fiction Re: The Ending of Us

    Wow, I loved that, and I am not really a huge fan of love storys and poems, I mean they are ok but this was more than just ok, I ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Friends

    Well, This was a really interesting poem, and I really did enjoy it. There were a few grammar things that I would fix, but I like how unique it is ...

    Dec 7, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Once Upon a Time

    I liked that, I didnt fully understand at times what was happening, but I did enjoy it, and I felt that you really descriped things really well and, well it ...

    Dec 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Kerosene

    I went to look at your poems after talking to you in the chat, and I am glade I talked to you because this was amazing, It was just good. ...

    Dec 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Hail

    Jack here for a review :) There are some really nice words you used in this poem, that really make the poem a lovely piece to read. I take it ...

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: blue moon [removed]

    Hey Jack here for a review first in forever actually :) Ok so I really liked this poem, it was worded very well and it was very nice to read ...

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Casualty

    Hey! Burrow here for a review! Well I love your title I love your idea, and man you use some good words and they are very thoughtfully placed through out ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Snape's Painting, Relocation Day!

    Jack here for a short review. I loved that, best harry potter fan fiction I ever read. It really brought back memories from reading the harry potter series and it ...

    Jan 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1 Splitter Splatter

    Hello Jack here for a review :) So to start of I really loved your beginning, I think it was sweet, and was empty of errors. It was very well ...

    Jan 4, 2015


You know what the big problem is in telling fantasy and reality apart? They're both ridiculous.
— The 12th Doctor