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  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Insidious Chapter Four- The Present

    Can you write the next chapter please, I really wanna read it, Im not much for romantic books and all, but this one is good and it is interesting and ...

    Dec 11, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: Forgive

    That was a good poem and I am not just saying that, me personally really enjoyed it, I loved how you ended the stanzas and I loved the bit with ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The wealth we have in common

    That was a very good essay I think and I thought it had some really good points and I loved the Albus quote, that is an amazing quote. I like ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Action / Adventure Re: I'd Only Wanted A Tissue

    I have to say I really enjoyed reading that and for something you say was written early in the morning it was amazing. I dont know I just enjoyed reading ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Hush Hush

    Hello This is a very nice poem, and there are some lovely words in it, but I really found it hard to understand what was fully going on. But everything ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Dragon's Doings

    I have to agree with you, it does make me feel like a dragon. This poem really flowed well and it is one of the first fantasy poems that I ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, Teen Fiction Re: The Ending of Us

    Wow, I loved that, and I am not really a huge fan of love storys and poems, I mean they are ok but this was more than just ok, I ...

    Dec 8, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Friends

    Well, This was a really interesting poem, and I really did enjoy it. There were a few grammar things that I would fix, but I like how unique it is ...

    Dec 7, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Once Upon a Time

    I liked that, I didnt fully understand at times what was happening, but I did enjoy it, and I felt that you really descriped things really well and, well it ...

    Dec 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Kerosene

    I went to look at your poems after talking to you in the chat, and I am glade I talked to you because this was amazing, It was just good. ...

    Dec 5, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Hail

    Jack here for a review :) There are some really nice words you used in this poem, that really make the poem a lovely piece to read. I take it ...

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: blue moon [removed]

    Hey Jack here for a review first in forever actually :) Ok so I really liked this poem, it was worded very well and it was very nice to read ...

    Nov 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Casualty

    Hey! Burrow here for a review! Well I love your title I love your idea, and man you use some good words and they are very thoughtfully placed through out ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fanfiction Re: Snape's Painting, Relocation Day!

    Jack here for a short review. I loved that, best harry potter fan fiction I ever read. It really brought back memories from reading the harry potter series and it ...

    Jan 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Chapter 1 Splitter Splatter

    Hello Jack here for a review :) So to start of I really loved your beginning, I think it was sweet, and was empty of errors. It was very well ...

    Jan 4, 2015


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