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Re: The Little Girl
This piece is great. I thought the end especially was very well typed: "She looked in the mirror at the side of the chapel She smiled She remembered seeing herself ...
Oct 26, 2012 -
Re: To My Future Daughter
Wow this is really good! I love pretty much everything about this! I don't dislike anything because it is so good! Just watch your grammer and spelling
Oct 15, 2012 -
Re: my fingers, buried in the frost
I do infact like this... I can relate because I walk to school every morning in below 60 degree weather so I understand ! I like how it makes you ...
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Eagle Talon Files (3)
I loved it... Thats all I have to say :)
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Father and son
Could be longer but it is pretty funny haha
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Decay
I like it... I can relate to it... It makes me feel like I am actually their!
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Let's buy a Death Permit!
Sounds good... Didn't have enough time to read it all but I did like the first bit of it!
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Nothing Never Happened
Wow! That was good and very emotional! I loved it! I think you should write more stuff like this! It is the best thing I have read in a while! ...
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Running from your Smile
Sounds pretty good to me but I just wish it wasn't about running track... I can't relate to it that much because I do not run track... I don't do ...
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: In Love On a Tour Bus
Wow! I love this! It had me sitting on the edge of my sit!!! I love the Jonas Brothers too! I loved reading this!!! You should post more stuff like ...
Oct 14, 2012 -
Re: Woman's World...
I think that this is the best poem I have ever read that is related t women! I love how it flowed and rhymed! I don't think I have anything ...
Oct 14, 2012