Published October 12, 2012
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I do infact like this... I can relate because I walk to school every morning in below 60 degree weather so I understand ! I like how it makes you feel like you are really there and I don't really think I have anything bad to say about this besides that it could be longer!
This is stunning. I love it. The imagry is absolutly amazing, your vocabulary is beautiful, and the whole structure adds to the intrigue of it. I keep re-reading it, I wish my poetry was half as good as this! Please keep wiriting, I want to read more poetry like this!