BubblegumGoddess

Hey there Keepwriting! I have to admit, your title was what drew me into this essay of your because it was a struggle that I too have dealt with. My ...

Hey there! First I would like to say, I really liked how you described this story to draw people in. Before I even read it I was excited to! I ...

Hey there! I really fell in love with your description in the beginning. The way you worded things really set the scene for the rest of the story and I ...

Hey there! BubblegumGoddess here for a review! Im gonna go a little in depth with this piece! Starting off at the beginning. "It hurts, deep inside, beneath her pride of ...

Hey there Tamilwriter! BubblegumGoddess here for a review! Something that I would like to bring up first off is my confusion. To me this piece did not make sense with ...

Hey there! I'm just dropping in for a review! I'd like to start off this review telling you just how much I enjoyed this piece! Your details were exquisite and ...

Hi there JustALittleBarry! I really enjoyed reading this lovely poem of yours. You did an excellent job with your diction and the overall flow of the poem. It created a ...

Hi RavenBlack! I have a little review for this chapter that I hope you are able to use when editing your work! First I would like to commend you for ...

Hey there PrincessInk! (Loving that username by the way) I'd like to start off this review with my overall impression of this poem...I LOVED IT! It was short and sweet ...

Hi SarukaTheHuman! I found this poem really relatable. I also enjoyed how you sort of called out society when you said "we as society see lethal humor as common and ...

Hi Castor! Oh my goodness I loved this piece. I will definitely be reading more of your work once this review is done. The first thing I loved is the ...

Hey there LoyalDay! You really had me worried there for a moment! I'm not sure if this poem is meant to be humorous or not but by your lack of ...

Hey there klennon14! This piece is so lovely! You definitely had me at your first line "If I engulfed your love any more I would become the sea." This poem ...

Hey there Augustus! First off I would like to point out some of this works strengths. "Day is the color of your childhood tricycle" This was such a brilliant way ...