BrumalHunter

Salutations! I haven't read the two previous chapters, for which I apologise. Instead, I shall try to comment on things like characterisation and imagery, as opposed to- Oh, it's you ...

Salutations! So, I have no idea what this being is, what it used to be, or why it is now trapped in a physical body, but that is of my ...

Salutations! Oh, so this is an autobiography of sorts? That's interesting! Personally, my life up to this point certainly doesn't warrant being captured onto paper (or digital files, as it ...

Salutations! Oh, you have another novel you're writing at the same time? You know, I think this might just be the novel I reviewed previously. I'm not sure. Well, you ...

Salutations! I think I've reviewed one of your previous chapter parts, but even if I have, I can't remember what this story is about. As that is the case, I'm ...

Salutations. I haven't read any of your chapters before, so instead of critiquing the plot, I'll jump in and look at the other aspects. I immediately noticed this is difficult ...

Salutations! Your username and avatar look familiar. I may have reviewed a previous chapter of this before, but then again, I may be imagining it. Either way, I don't know ...

Salutations! I have no idea what has happened in your story so far, so I shan't attempt to write a review as if I did. Instead, I'll be looking at ...

Salutations for the last time! So, the final part of the chapter. It's definitely disturbing, but hey, there are plenty of twisted people in the world. I am surprised you're ...

Halfway done! This is just an observation, but the different parts of this chapter don't exactly seem to be related. First, they travel a bit, then they find a shooting ...

Back once more. Oh, right. "Z-Day". Pardon my slowness. Well, now that I am aware of the apocalypse's nature, I can assure you that the conclusion to my previous review ...

Salutations again. Now that I've read the first part of the chapter, I shall be able to provide slightly more feedback on the characterisation. I shall, of course, still provide ...

Salutations! I am afraid I cannot provide critique on your novel's progress up to this point, but I shall endeavour to do this particular chapter justice. First sentences are important, ...

Salutations! Seeing as this is chapter eighteen of your novel, it would be inconsiderate of me to review it as if I were following it; obviously, I have no idea ...

Salutations! If I tried to review this as I would a novel I am actually following, I would be doing you a gross disservice. As such, I have decided to ...