BraidenEllis

Alright, it's Braiden here for a review on Review Day! This poem was a bit hard to understand, but I think I know what you meant (so I will put ...

Heyo, it's Braiden, and I'm just here to do a nice little review on your work! Okay, so I thought this was a beautiful poem; it had a very nice ...

Hey, I'm Braiden, and I'm here to review your poem (of course). Also, welcome to YWS! (I don't know if I've been here long enough to be welcoming people but ...

Heyo, here for a review! Okay, so I liked the possibilities you conceived in such a small piece. Your work was really pretty and had a bunch of meaning for ...

Dear lord... This poem was just...breathtaking. I really have not much else to say. The vocabulary was gorgeous, the messages, the design.... just wow. Much wow. I often got confused, ...

Heyo! Here for a review! First off, hoo boy this was a bleak poem (which is what I usually read, being honest). the message in it was really dark, and ...

Heyo! Just doing a quick review! (Welcome to YWS by the way!) First off, let me just say that this was a REALLY good poem, in my opinion. I really ...

Heyo! Okay, so I like the starting plot of this story; it gets you involved right off the bat. your grammar is pretty good, and I didn't see any spelling ...

Heyo! I really loved this poem! I didn't find anything wrong with it, really, and I loved your word choices. The poem was very reflecting, and I loved how you ...

OKay, so I like the idea of this story: boy finds out about his sexuality after many failed attempts with having girlfriends by meeting his Prince Charming and coming to ...

Heyo! So, I was kind of confused as to why she got mad at Eric at the beginning, after he said "Oh." I was thinking, "Well what was he supposed ...

All typos and advice pointed out are in brackets. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ As we lay there, on his soft fleece blanket, looking up at the beautiful array of flashing, breathtaking fireworks, I ...

Heyo! I'm doing a review of your LOVELY and RELATABLE poem! Okay, first off, I like how you made it such a simple writing style. You didn't have to use ...

Reviewing the next bit of your story! The plot is still slowly progressing further, which is great. Don't want to jump into the plot all of a sudden and leave ...

I thought this was pretty interesting! It left me wondering "Wait, what?" in a good way. It was a good hook to the start of your story, leading me to ...