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BookWolf

BookWolf

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Prologue

    First off, let me just say, WOW! This was so incredibly moving and gripping that I almost forgot to stay alert for typos. Your way with words is truly beautiful. ...

    Jan 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fanfiction Re: Prologue

    Before I say anything, I would like to welcome you to YWS. :D If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I hope you enjoy your time at ...

    Jan 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Shadow Behind the Closet

    Wow, this was a beautiful poem. :) I really enjoy your wording. Poems really aren't my specialty, so perhaps you should just ignore everything I say because I don't really ...

    Jan 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Fanfic- chapter 1

    Hello, BookWolf is here for a review! Wow it's been a long time since I've done this. . . :) Let's start off with some sentences. "The streets were always ...

    Dec 30, 2015
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: The Test

    Woah, I was not expecting this! :D This is so much different compared to the other stuff you write, but I loved it nonetheless. :D I would really like to ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter Two (edited)

    Well, I'm ashamed to say that I can't help you with this part of the story either. :P I can say though, that in this one, the writing seemed much ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter One (edited)

    Hello! :D I saw chapter one for this and noticed there was a prologue, so I guess I'll read this first. Okay, so there's not really much to say. :D ...

    Dec 17, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Shadowed Light: Chapter 1

    Awesome job at getting my attention from the very beginning! :D Your description is pretty much flawless, and I really found myself falling for Isabeau. I thought that it was ...

    Dec 14, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: (untitled) Chapter Two (part two)

    Well, I guess this is gonna be a short review. :D Mainly because I could hardly find anything wrong, and most of my corrections are simple mistakes or just suggestions. ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: (untitled) Chapter Two (part one)

    Yay! Super long one! :D Yeah, I'm reviewing it even though you haven't asked. :D I just saw it and couldn't resist. So, exciting things are happening; like Stonemouth becoming ...

    Dec 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Dog That Ruled Alone

    D: Wow... just wow... I loved this so much. There are so many words to describe how this poem made me feel, and none of them are fit to really ...

    Dec 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Year of the Rip: Prologue

    Hello! :D Well, there's really nothing I can find that hasn't been said by LeftyWriter or justdream, so I'm just going to say that I really enjoyed this. :D You ...

    Dec 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: (no title yet) Chapter One (part two)

    Okay, so this one is much more exciting than the first! :D And it's longer. :P You've really peaked my curiosity with that vision Whisperstream had. Like, who were those ...

    Dec 6, 2014
  • Other » Other, General Re: Looking Deep Inside

    This is beautiful! :D

    Dec 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: Where is your god?

    I love this. :D The rhyming is SO perfect, and I can't find anything wrong with it. Except maybe that you forgot to capitalize, but I sort of got the ...

    Dec 4, 2014


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