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Re: Prologue
First off, let me just say, WOW! This was so incredibly moving and gripping that I almost forgot to stay alert for typos. Your way with words is truly beautiful. ...
Jan 2, 2016 -
Re: Prologue
Before I say anything, I would like to welcome you to YWS. :D If you have any questions, feel free to ask me. I hope you enjoy your time at ...
Jan 1, 2016 -
Re: The Shadow Behind the Closet
Wow, this was a beautiful poem. :) I really enjoy your wording. Poems really aren't my specialty, so perhaps you should just ignore everything I say because I don't really ...
Jan 1, 2016 -
Re: Fanfic- chapter 1
Hello, BookWolf is here for a review! Wow it's been a long time since I've done this. . . :) Let's start off with some sentences. "The streets were always ...
Dec 30, 2015 -
Re: The Test
Woah, I was not expecting this! :D This is so much different compared to the other stuff you write, but I loved it nonetheless. :D I would really like to ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter Two (edited)
Well, I'm ashamed to say that I can't help you with this part of the story either. :P I can say though, that in this one, the writing seemed much ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Deception's Blade - Chapter One (edited)
Hello! :D I saw chapter one for this and noticed there was a prologue, so I guess I'll read this first. Okay, so there's not really much to say. :D ...
Dec 17, 2014 -
Re: Shadowed Light: Chapter 1
Awesome job at getting my attention from the very beginning! :D Your description is pretty much flawless, and I really found myself falling for Isabeau. I thought that it was ...
Dec 14, 2014 -
Re: (untitled) Chapter Two (part two)
Well, I guess this is gonna be a short review. :D Mainly because I could hardly find anything wrong, and most of my corrections are simple mistakes or just suggestions. ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: (untitled) Chapter Two (part one)
Yay! Super long one! :D Yeah, I'm reviewing it even though you haven't asked. :D I just saw it and couldn't resist. So, exciting things are happening; like Stonemouth becoming ...
Dec 12, 2014 -
Re: The Dog That Ruled Alone
D: Wow... just wow... I loved this so much. There are so many words to describe how this poem made me feel, and none of them are fit to really ...
Dec 10, 2014 -
Re: Year of the Rip: Prologue
Hello! :D Well, there's really nothing I can find that hasn't been said by LeftyWriter or justdream, so I'm just going to say that I really enjoyed this. :D You ...
Dec 9, 2014 -
Re: (no title yet) Chapter One (part two)
Okay, so this one is much more exciting than the first! :D And it's longer. :P You've really peaked my curiosity with that vision Whisperstream had. Like, who were those ...
Dec 6, 2014 -
Re: Looking Deep Inside
This is beautiful! :D
Dec 5, 2014 -
Re: Where is your god?
I love this. :D The rhyming is SO perfect, and I can't find anything wrong with it. Except maybe that you forgot to capitalize, but I sort of got the ...
Dec 4, 2014
