Hey !
I really enjoyed this poem not just because it was based of supernatural (Even though im personally a massive fan of supernatural) but because it shows my belief about God as well ,how God isn't there when things go wrong. My only problem with this poem is in the first stances you repeat the first line twice , if you like it like that carry on . The words did rhyme and they did follow a beat . But don't forget capital letters ! (Sorry im really picky about capital letters). Other than that i love the idea of the poem and how you managed to link it to supernatural.
Hope my feedback helps
-Angel ^--^
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