Booie

Ok i'm just going to say it ....... this made me cry, it made me cry before I even knew I was crying. It made me cry in a way ...

This is so beautiful. Don't mind what others say about the emotion, I think that is what give you your edge. Keep with the big feelings. One thing I will ...

I think your idea of making this into a novel is a good one. The short story above could be your prologue. I like the brutality of the angle and ...

I like the way you flashed back to the old man telling her the story. It is a lovey way of writing. The only thing I have to say is ...

I don't mean to pry but I just have to ask, are you ok? I know that life can be hard sometimes but that doesn't mean you have to hurt ...

Your story is amazing! It is filled with suspense and mystery. The way you get distracted from the main topic is intriguing, I find it let my mind relax after ...

i like this poem, the women in it is brave and fearless. i love the reference to freemen, it really makes a point and stands out in my eyes. The ...

it is good, I like they way you express her feelings after she shouts at Sam. I really felt his pain when she said it and how when he left ...

This is very good. It is descriptive and entertaining. It grabs your attention and makes you read more. I love the reference to his eyes. "They held so many secrets, ...

This story is AMAZING!!! It is so genuine and heartbreaking. you really captured the feelings of the too people in the story. it was so intense and yet you managed ...

This is a very good story. It gives the reader a lot of advise and will really help a lot of people. one thing I have to say is that ...

I loved this story it really made me ask a lot of questions. It was very descriptive and interesting

This is a really good story but I think you could go into a little bit more detail. What happened between Jeremy and Jessie? What is Jeremy like? You should ...