BondGirl007

I got right away what it was about, but the thing that confused me was the time. At first I thought that it was during the time of concentration camps, ...

Hey Awake! Let me say that when I read the title of the poem it turned me off. I was expecting a rant on his horribleness, and was really surprised ...

Hey Hoopster! So as said before, you don't want to sacrifice the meaning of the poem just to make it rhyme. I don't really think onomatopoeia works here though, like ...

Hey Rose, the only thing I didn't like was the repetition of this. the mug of something hot, something brown, something good, something sweet; It takes away from the poem ...

Hey Mots, (you don't mind if I call you that do you?) I really did like this poem quite a bit! Your flow is great, and the way you sometimes ...

Hey Forest, I really liked this poem, the only problem I had was that it didn't really tell a story...but that didn't bother me too much. One little bitty thing ...

Okay, so what I feel you need to improve on is instead of telling me things I want you to show me, it's always way more fun reading poems where ...

Nothing really stood out to me in this poem, I've read a lot of poems like this, and I'll read a lot more- love leaves, and they're heartbroken. Since most ...

As said before, I would have never guessed this was about ghost bikers...there were somethings that I really wanted to know, like how did they die? Also, this might just ...

Jiggs this is so awesome! xD There's really nothing I can add, and even if I tried it would only lessen it's awesomeness. Many were the noobsshe slayed, both directly ...

Hey Fixed! Very lovely poem you have here :D. I really liked it, my favorite part was this stanza. Not a word was spoken, from the man with so many ...

Hey Mad, There really is no way I can review this, it's all very random, and I must say my first reaction from the very beginning was "Wow, this guy ...

Hey Ruby! Overall I really liked this poem, it really gave me a sort of fairy tale feel which I really like. The rhymes didn't feel too forced, and I ...

I loved this poem, you did a bang up job on it. I find it funny, some of the best poetry I've read lately has had no capitalization, and has ...

Yeah, it reminds me of when I was younger, and the playground memories...haha now I really want to go swing. I have to agree with Amy about the end, it ...