BlueSunset

Okay, first off: I found one error up near the beginning that I think would be better to change. People weren't looked at through our special lens, With labels that ...

Hey there, Neverland! This feels almost like it's fantasy. I love how the Sisters sort of develop in this poem, and in the end, they changed into someone new. They ...

Hello, Captain. Happy Review Day! So... Lets take a look at those nitpicks ;) Land is where we dwell, it is very green. It grows, and grows, so it looks ...

Hey, speakerskat! What a nice poem you have here. Before I say what's good about it, I would like to clear out all the nitpicks. Everytime I cut a herart, ...

Hello again, Tigerlilly~ I like the seriousness of this poem. Very interesting. It adds a personality to this poem which I really like. Still though, it has a hint of ...

I like this a lot, Tigerlilly! Very creative, and I love the rhythm and rhyme in this. It's very emotional and I love the shortness of it. If you are ...

Wow! This poem was great, but when I got to the ending I wanted it to keep going. It was really good. I encourage you to possibly write a little ...

This poem is very meaningful. I love how you include everyone in this poem, and how you tell people music is free and anyone can make it. I've never read ...

Wow, another poem by you! :D I read a poem quite like this, with "being free" and "kindness". I think it's very cute how you changed this poem into questions, ...

Okay, before I get started on the review, I'd like to make a guess. Is it fire? I love your rhyming in this poem, and your great vocabulary. One thingI ...

Hello, Scribbles! I love your rhyme scheme here. It goes on throughout the poem perfectly. I think it flowed nicely together. My favorite stanza was: A world like that, where ...

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Hello, Scribbles! I love your rhyme scheme here. It goes on throughout the poem perfectly. I think it flowed nicely together. My favorite stanza was: A world like that, where ...

Okay, I just read this and I really like where this story is going. Just one spelling error I found: "Bye Lavender!" I all. Here you should replace "all" with ...

Well, well, Snazzy. Great poem! It's very long and I love the rhythm of it. It's sort of like a short story but sort of not, you know what I ...

Hello! Sunset here to review another one of your works! I'm excited! This reminded me a lot of your other work, Dear Stupid Blank Page. Yes, that was it. Anyways, ...