BlueSunset

Hello, AliceAfternoon. I'm Sunset, and I will be reviewing this lovely poem of yours. To start off, I'd like to point out the simplicity this has, but how it ties ...

Hello, Kaila, and happy Review Day. Sunset101 here to review. For a prologue, I'd say this is off to a great start. It has a few ups and downs - ...

Helllo, Alice (hope I can call you that)! :D I can definitely feel the "saltiness" of this poem. It has a rough and toughness in the outside, with an aggressive ...

Hello! I'm Sunset101 and I'll be reviewing your poem today. :D This is a fantastic work you've written. There are some grammatical errors and punctuation mistakes that I've found, which ...

Hi again! :D I'm excited to get reviewing. So, I see we've switched perspectives here. This is a common way novels work, sort of like a system or pattern created ...

Hello. You have a fabulous start to this novel, I'm excited to see more already! :D Details were superb, descriptions and dialogue were written in a way I couldn't agree ...

Hello, Sunset here! :D Wow, this was an amazing piece you've written. I'm not surprised that it got the spotlight. Most of the words were well chosen, and the rhyming ...

Hey there, Snazzy! :D I'll be reviewing your outstanding poem. I love this feel and sensation running all through the poem. It's really touching in a way that's hard to ...

Nice poem! I'll be reviewing and going over it! :D Right when this poem took off, I knew it would be interesting. Great imagery, and in some parts it flows ...

Hi, Snazzy! :D I just read about your crazy week you are having on your wall, and just as I finished reading this it sort of cheered me up in ...

Hello. Sunset here to review this article of yours. Well, I'd just like to be honest and say one thing. I think that this could be split up into multiple ...

Hello, Ladybug. I'll be reviewing this work today. At last, the last few trickled in and the lights on their side dimmed. I don't know why, but the fact that ...

Hello, TheSilverFox! What a wonderful poem you've got here. :D Before I start, I'd like to say: Happy Review Day!!! Okay, no to the poem. I thought this was very ...

Hey, Felistia! Happy Review day. :D As part of Review day, I will be reviewing this pretty paradise work of yours. To get this thing started, I'd like to point ...

Hi - I'm Sun, in case you didn't know~ Anyways, I'm here for a review. This is a great piece you've composed here, the wonderful layout and rhythm that's set ...