Bloodlord

Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! Thank you so much for sharing this. I like how you take your experiences one step further in this piece. You not only remember ...

Hello, Bloodlord here to review your chapter! This is a really awesome start to the novel, and you already introduce many interesting conflicts and mysteries. Who is Jason? Why does ...

Hello, Bloodlord here for a review! This is a really nice poem. This is very inspirational, and the flow of your lines and words conveys a very peaceful and natural ...

Hello, Bloodlord here to review your poem! I think this captures summer really well, and in a fun way too! Your description is great, and I like the flow of ...

This is a really interesting opening for the book! You make Cora's character really interesting and mysterious, and I can't wait to see how her character develops. I also like ...

Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! I really enjoyed reading this, and you conveyed the creepiness of Shane's behavior really well. I can't wait to discover his true intentions in ...

Hello, Bloodlord here for a review! This was really interesting to read about. I watched the movie recently and noticed some of the things you mentioned, but I never understood ...

This is such a nice poem, though sadly many pit bulls are not as fortunate as this one. Your rhyme scheme is very natural and the ABAB form seems really ...

Hi, Bloodlord here again for a review! I enjoyed this chapter. You introduced us to the family really well, and you can really tell how much everyone cares for each ...

Already in the first chapter, you have developed the characters really well through your dialogue and description. Kenny and Bray's personalities are so different, and both so likeable, and I ...

This is a really nice poem. It expresses loss and memory in a beautiful way. I like how the rather lighthearted title 'Goofball' seems to symbolize both happiness and grief ...

Hi, Bloodlord here to review your beautiful poem! I really love the concept you use here. I like how the poem's perspective evolves from beginning to end, from "Is living ...

This is a beautiful apology, and I like how real, natural, and open you are here. This is relatable to many on several levels, but I feel as if very ...

Hi, Bloodlord here for a review! I apologize - I haven't actually read all of the chapters before this, so I will treat this chapter like its own piece and ...

The trip seems really fun! I like how you include pictures to make the story more real. However, the format in which you tell us what Seenu did makes the ...