BlockedWriter21

Before I start, I would like to say that I can definitely see the promise in the story plot. I can see where this would be a good story in ...

Short, sweet, and simple. I loved it. Obviously there isn't much room for critique here because it's short and to the point, but at the same time, that is my ...

First off, I really enjoyed the topic. It's very different from a lot of poetry as well with spiritual poetry. I enjoyed reading it and was intrigued from start to ...

First things first: As someone who has had dyslexia for years, I am truly impressed with the beautiful insight that you have out in this poem. You really delved in ...

Hello, Blocked Writer here. First of, I would like to say that I agree with wtppowers, it does get a little jumbled. But I also did see where you said ...

Hello, BlockedWriter21 here for a quick review, So, I can't really say that I know entirely where this was supposed to take me as in thoughts of how I was ...

I would like to start of by saying that I just joined this site yesterday, so if my review is not very helpful, I'd like to apologize in advance. I'm ...

To be honest, I don't normally read these kinds of poems Nothing against your style of writing. Honestly. It's just never the kind that I would pick up automatically. But, ...

First of, you were inspired by tea? Isn't is just downright crazy how, as writers, we are inspired by some of the strangest uses sometimes? Bur we use those strange ...

I really like this. It's short and simple but it still really captures how one can feel in separation of their significant other. I really like the flow of the ...

What I like so much about this particular poem is that I can almost imagine myself as the narrator/you. You imagery and pure writing is wonderful. The way your portray ...

This was fantastic! You may not think of yourself as a poet, but I greatly believe you have the potential. Your poem was very professional and beautiful nonetheless. I am ...

First off, I just want to say that your poem is fantastic. The way that you utilized the numbers from the first stanza throughout the whole poem was genius. The ...

I very much enjoyed this poem. It was heartfelt and touchy, yet the right amount of uniqueness to set it apart from the rest of the cliche heartfelt poems. I ...