Hi, I’m here to make a review.
I thought this prologue is pretty good. I feel as if though it was hard to read or understand at some points, because of grammatical errors but you’ve already gotten plenty of reviews covering those so I won’t go into them. I think this is a great prompt though. The idea of our protagonist realizing that they are in reality probably the antagonist in the story from an objective standpoint is something not typically seen. I love seeing new and creative ideas because I know how much more difficult it can be to try and be different with your plot so I applaud you for that. I look forward to seeing more of this.
Points: 59
Reviews: 4
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