I would like to start of by saying that I just joined this site yesterday, so if my review is not very helpful, I'd like to apologize in advance. I'm still kinda learning, but I will do my best. Here goes nothing.
One of the things that kinda makes my tilt sideways is the fact that this is labeled as poetry. Nothing against your work, but as a poet I am very confused where you get the poetry format from this. I do indeed seeing this as an article or just general. Although I do enjoy the format very much and think that is unique, I do have a questionable thought about this being poetry. Regardless, this is your work, not mine. If this is what you consider poetry, then keep writing your poetry my friend.
Next, I would like to say that this was very fun to read and I found my self laugh at some of these responses. As a feminist myself, I especially like response number 8. I do like the approach you took with this. It's almost like it would be wrong to laugh at these responses but yet, at the same time, you know you want to and just can't hold it in. I don't know if you were hoping to achieve a little comedy in this piece, but if you were, you did succeed.
Another thing, I like your topic. I'm not sure how you came about this, but it is unique and far from anything that I've read. i really like that about this piece. Not only is the format kinda quirk and fun, but so is the piece. Making this an overall enjoyable piece.
Lastly, I would just like to say that this was a very fun thing to read and that I hope you will continue to write pieces like this. I would definitely love to read them and offer up some more of my thoughts if you wouldn't mine.
Good luck and happy writing,
-BlockedWriter21
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