Blackwood

Yo Aria, Guess who. Someone who likes to review you really crazily. But I'm not going to be crazy this time. You are a good writer, but I feel like ...

WOOO! GO ALV Love it. Just going to give you a quick review starting with this one line Whenever a steep hill made me winded it felt as if I ...

Hello there, I am here to give you a review. When i first started readng this I noticed it immidiately in the first paragraph. What you have here seems to ...

I came to read this because I told you I would. You have much descriptive writing in here, good imagery, and for a first poem its very nice. One thing ...

Hellow there, you will be my final review for review day (maybe) I think so since there are only 8 minutes remaining so I hope you can enjoy this review ...

Hey there my friend. I have come here on this fine day to grace you with my pleasant words of review time. I feel like there is something missing here. ...

I could hear the constant chatter, and movement of everyone. You could hear the movement of everyone? Sounds echoed off the walls Completely unlikely, you are in a crowded mall, ...

I think for this peom you should put it into lines ratehr than having a block. Who is that girl that follows me? Who is that girl who stares? Who ...

Where does the poem start? I am guessing it starts after the italics, You should make it more clear because I thought the italics were part of it but yeah ...

I like this, it's simple, but I think it could have just a little bit more. I also think that you could have ended with "lay down and die" or ...

I like this because you have a strong voice. Your writing and sentences fit together nicely with one another and really create a good flow. I like your use of ...

Its atmosphere- sharp but mellow, was guarded No, you punctuation here is a no-no. It's atmosphere, sharp but mellow, was guarded That should be a comma, not an annoying hyphen. ...

Ok the first poem. What the heck have you done here? I have no idea what you have done here, but there are some weird lines. I am not sure ...

You are an excellent poet. I love these poems, all in all, I would love to read more from you. I think one of the particular reasons I like this ...

I read these the whole way through back when you posted them and really enjoyed them, so here I have returned for a review. I am unsure how I feel ...