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Blackwood

Blackwood

  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: The Falling Sky

    Sorry my review fails

    Jul 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: we are not/we are

    Nice poem. You have a good way with words. I usually leave no comment on the parts I like so I am going to skip straight ahead to some things ...

    Jul 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Tried

    This rhyming is excellent. I was very impressed. I am completely confused as if this is lyrics or a poem. Your category hasn't showed up properly. Either way I feel ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: blur

    Review for you. I have nicknamed myself evil reviewer. Ok first thing first. I look at your poem as a whole. I see lots of different length stanzas. Your first ...

    Jul 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Sacrifice - Chapter One

    Hello. Mind my reviews. I am very evil, and a very evil reviewer. Enjoy my thousand words of (attempted) wisdom. *Please note I will be giving you a lot of ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter VII

    Guess whoooooooooooooooooooo. ITS EVIL SANTA. And this one is out of the kinkiness of my heart, I even did you two already. Ok I am giving you a second review ...

    Jul 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter VII

    Ok I haven't read this YET but I am going to say this really sincerely. It took you 7 chapters to return to your original character. In between there were ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter II

    Evil Santa is back after just posting a review for the previous chapter of this. Evil Santa is very exhausted from the previous review and feels like not doing that ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter I

    I am evil Santa. Here is my super intense evil review that you will hate me for by the end of it. The dawn I got bound to the Boy, ...

    Jul 13, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: The Extemporized Machine feat. thewritersdream (Parts 1 to 4) (Draft 1)

    Edit: It was changed so oh well. Anyway, I am a noob so my brain can not comprehend this genius of a poem. I think you need to put some ...

    Jul 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: A Journey Not Over

    Alright, here I am with a review for you. Firstly the line: "Persistence for existence the distance shows," I see what you were trying to do there with the rhyming ...

    Jul 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate

    First of all, this part below was awesome. Had Black not told me to write this, I would've never fell asleep, The horse never would've bit the cow, and the ...

    Jul 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: My Crown

    Nice poem, why is every line a link though? When I clicked on it it took me to the publishing centre. Anyway, I think you need to put in some ...

    Jul 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Writer's Depression

    This poem is great, it really captures the feeling of writers block. I am curious as to why you close to arrange the lines like so. It certainly does make ...

    Jul 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 50 hours straight

    Amazing. I am not kidding. I was genuinely enraptured. And I am not just saying this because you are awesome. It was legitimately entertaining. I mean if you wanted nit ...

    Jul 10, 2013


People ask if I ever experience writer's block and I just have to laugh... that's my default position.
— Aaron Sorkin