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Re: The Falling Sky
Sorry my review fails
Jul 24, 2013 -
Re: we are not/we are
Nice poem. You have a good way with words. I usually leave no comment on the parts I like so I am going to skip straight ahead to some things ...
Jul 18, 2013 -
Re: I Tried
This rhyming is excellent. I was very impressed. I am completely confused as if this is lyrics or a poem. Your category hasn't showed up properly. Either way I feel ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: blur
Review for you. I have nicknamed myself evil reviewer. Ok first thing first. I look at your poem as a whole. I see lots of different length stanzas. Your first ...
Jul 15, 2013 -
Re: Sacrifice - Chapter One
Hello. Mind my reviews. I am very evil, and a very evil reviewer. Enjoy my thousand words of (attempted) wisdom. *Please note I will be giving you a lot of ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter VII
Guess whoooooooooooooooooooo. ITS EVIL SANTA. And this one is out of the kinkiness of my heart, I even did you two already. Ok I am giving you a second review ...
Jul 14, 2013 -
Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter VII
Ok I haven't read this YET but I am going to say this really sincerely. It took you 7 chapters to return to your original character. In between there were ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter II
Evil Santa is back after just posting a review for the previous chapter of this. Evil Santa is very exhausted from the previous review and feels like not doing that ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: The Fourth Wall~ Chapter I
I am evil Santa. Here is my super intense evil review that you will hate me for by the end of it. The dawn I got bound to the Boy, ...
Jul 13, 2013 -
Re: The Extemporized Machine feat. thewritersdream (Parts 1 to 4) (Draft 1)
Edit: It was changed so oh well. Anyway, I am a noob so my brain can not comprehend this genius of a poem. I think you need to put some ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: A Journey Not Over
Alright, here I am with a review for you. Firstly the line: "Persistence for existence the distance shows," I see what you were trying to do there with the rhyming ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: If Random Were a Language, I Would Eat Chocolate
First of all, this part below was awesome. Had Black not told me to write this, I would've never fell asleep, The horse never would've bit the cow, and the ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: My Crown
Nice poem, why is every line a link though? When I clicked on it it took me to the publishing centre. Anyway, I think you need to put in some ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: Writer's Depression
This poem is great, it really captures the feeling of writers block. I am curious as to why you close to arrange the lines like so. It certainly does make ...
Jul 12, 2013 -
Re: 50 hours straight
Amazing. I am not kidding. I was genuinely enraptured. And I am not just saying this because you are awesome. It was legitimately entertaining. I mean if you wanted nit ...
Jul 10, 2013
