Blackwood

Formatting: Use Shift-enter to miss one line like I just did. Otherwise using enter misses a gap like so. I like this about telephones, and how landlines are becoming redundant. ...

I don't know if the spelling mistake thing was a joke or not but I will take it was not. If so, why so? What does adding spelling mistakes add ...

This si a very nice poem with nice usage of words, however my biggest confusion in the title, (and in turn a link in the poem) you cannot fault a ...

Great poem! In my opinion i thought that this was really about more than newlyweds, (maybe even less about newlyweds and more about other things) because it has so much ...

Hey buddy, you need to go through this and reformat everything. When someone is speaking you need to put in a line-break. To do this in the publishing centre hold ...

Nice rhyming you have here, each line has a good consistent rhyme with the previous. You have some good ideas here but you also have a few cliches to look ...

Great poem, very shocking. I wouldn't call it horror though, even though its dark, I know yws is in need of more a diverse range of genres. The necked item ...

This is completely obviously about me

I really like this poem, it has a great sense mysteriousness to it. I see what you are trying to do with keeping everything in lowercase, but the i's really ...

*readddddddddds* I had nothing to see, but I wanted to see what was real though. Yes I know this is rhymed, but this sentence doesn't flow nice and its sense ...

There once was a boy round the age of seven. You mean around. He took him to a faraway place, and showed him the foulest most hideous place You said ...

I absolute love this. I was engaged right from the start. I really enjoy this type of fiction. I'm sick of pretty things and depressing things all over, this really ...

I feel like you need to put stanzas in here and try some line breaks. I like this whole idea of not being able to be surprised anymore, it is ...

Good poem. good linebreaks. I think in your very first part a little bit of rephrasing could do than they can feel the pain was a little bit staggering and ...

I kicked a tin can towards a cat, its fur ruffled and torn I think that you should have written your linebreak on the comma. I kicked a tin can ...