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Blackwood

  • Short Story » Culture, Narrative Re: I, am a Universalist

    Hey there. When I read this a few things about it came across my mind. Firstly is the format, what it is written as and how it is written as. ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 11:15 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ghost

    Hey there. I like It. One thing I am confused at. it's not a smoke or a dope you can't have 'a' smoke. It's really grammical incorrect. I don't know ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 10:33 pm
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Flawed

    Moist say I am very impressed wig this free verse. I am really sorry for any typos of autocorrect that I make in advance. Please blame the iPod. Anyway, I ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 10:20 pm
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Beauty Lies In The Eyes Of Love

    Nice job here. I like the meaning, the title, and the way you have executed this poem. Lets get right into reviewing. Firstly, you seem to have forgotten much of ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 10:04 pm
  • Lyrics » General, Lyrical Re: Bloody Revolution *edited version*

    I really like this a lot. recently I was run down on some lyrics I wrote because they were too uh.. dark and evil and creepy, but anyway, I am ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:19 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Demon in Disguise

    Review for you! Now I know as I watched you go that it was nothing; I feel like you need some extra punctuation in here. "Now I know, as I ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 8:56 pm
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Calypso

    Wow, I really like this poem, good work. I have always admired the ancient myths and legends of ancient Greek culture. Your hands are bruised, blooded. Just in this line ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 8:47 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Prologue - Shadowdale

    Hmm what is this? I see that you have written a new story prologue. I see I see. i must say, I am impressed. I think your writing has improved ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 1:04 pm
  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: The Sun

    Some cute rhymes you have here. Its not very scientific but I am sure your class enjoyed it very much. People get tired and they long for a seat. This ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 12:30 pm
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Unlocked Puzzle

    What a beautiful poem. The opening phrase, I loved this, Tap your pencil on your thigh try to catalyze the flow of unpresented words However it doesn't seem like unpresented ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 12:15 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I want to be punished no more, Daddy.

    Well well well, I kept seeing people comment on this and I was wondering what was so grat about it. At first i thought It might have been something kinky... ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 11:46 am
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Culture Re: Peaceful Imaginings

    I have no idea who John and Yoko are. Maybe some explanation at the beginning or end would help. The imagery you used is very good. I feel you portrayed ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 10:39 am
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: operation imperial ch-11

    Ok review time. I know this is going to seem sort of weird but the first sentence. After watching, numerous deaths due to food poisoning, a rape incident, fainted drug ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 10:28 am
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Unbroken Part 1: Chapter One

    Oh wow... uh... Your writing is very good. Very easy to read. Very engaging and I just kept reading, I didn't feel like I was forcing myself. Ummm.. at least ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:18 am
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love in Fire

    Doctor here to cure your case of the Plague, its very serious you see, you might die at any moment. You see your punctuation has some bad illness... infact it ...

    Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:02 am


I’d heard he had started a fistfight in one of the seedier local taverns because someone had insisted on saying the word “utilize” instead of “use".
— Patrick Rothfuss, A Wise Man's Fear