The opening line to this poem is probably the most profound thing in this work.
Imagine a world of peace.
It draws the reader in, having them starting their brains, challenging them, asking them what they think a world of peace is like. I sat here for a few minutes before continuing reading, pondering the meaning of life on this broken planet.
I love how you have periods at the ends of the lines but seem to continue the sentence.
I didn't quite understand this line until I read it over and over!
Where the people live in calm like mindedness
The final lines really wrap up this poem nicely, and give it a touch of wistful longings.
Imagine a world for yourself.
And a world for those that you love too.
I really do want a place for myself and my loved ones too!
Thank-you for this above average poem that melts the heart. Dedicating it to John and Yoko really is so sweet. I'm sure they'd love it!
Happy review Day!
yubbies21
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