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Re: Blood
Hey there! BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Let's get started! So, Retro, I've been following you since the second day I got on the site, and It was ...
Apr 3, 2014 -
Re: Horror Stories
Hey!!! BitterRosemary here to give you a review!!! Let's get started! To begin, I really enjoyed this pom. It was raw, and honest. It contained the core of what true ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: Lemon Melancholy
Hey!! BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Let's get started! To start with, I loved this. The details were incredible and precise and the imagery was strong and beautiful. ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: Melody
Hey there! BitterRosemary here to give you a review!! Let's get started. First things first. I have never read a poem like this. I liked it. It's a bit hard ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: What If I Don't Want to Smile?
Hey there! BitterRosemary here to give you a review. First off, this is... indescribable. It's like you got in my head and wrote down all the thoughts there. I personally ...
Mar 21, 2014 -
Re: The real Dr. Who?
Hey! BitterRosemary here to give you a review. Let's get started. First things first. OH MY GOD FELLOW WHOVIAN HEELLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! :) :) :) I've actually never met anyone who has ...
Mar 18, 2014 -
Re: Hear Me
Hey!! BitterRosemary here to give you a review!! Let's get started!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is gorgeous. Literally. Beautiful. I love the simple format. It has somewhat complicated lyrics, so keeping the for
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Jon
Hey!! BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Let's get started. First off, this is absolutely gorgeous.- I love the interesting point of view, one of being used up and ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: S.O.S
Hey there! BitterRosemary here to give you a review. Let's get started. First of all, kudos to you for being brave enough to publish a religous poem. I myself am ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: numb.
Hey!!! BitterRosemary here to give you a review!! Let's get started. Frist off, WELCOME TO YWS!! I am also new here; I've only been on 3 days. But welcome nonetheless. ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Yes I'm Not
Hey!! BitterRosemary here to give you a review!!! Let's get started! I absolutely love this poem. The contradictions throughout are excellent and really covey a sense of defiance and "fuck ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: The day I died
Hey!! It's BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Let's get started! I'm going to review your poem a few lines at a time: "The first time I saw poetry ...
Mar 17, 2014 -
Re: Depressing Poetry Collection
Hey BitterRosemary here to give a review! Let's get started... First off, you should know this poem made me cry. I understand all of this, and it struck a nerve ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: One Breath
Hey! BitterRosemary here for a review! Let's get things started. This is brilliant, inspired, whatever you want to call it. It is actually exactly what I intended to write in ...
Mar 16, 2014 -
Re: You
Hey! BitterRosemary here to give you a review! Hey, first thing, I want to congradulate you on writing one of the first poem that actually confused me for awhile. The ...
Mar 16, 2014
