Biluata

Hello there, Luata here for a review! First off all, please, don't end a synopsis in a question. I mean, yes, it is good to leave your readers with questions ...

Hello there. Luata here for a sort-of-review. I mean, how the heck are you supposed to review something like this? Something that is most certainly not in my area of ...

Hiya! Luata here for a review. Like IDontKnowMaybeSo has already said, I'm not really sure how to critique this work so the majority of this review is mostly going to ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review! Now, before I start, let me make a couple things known to you. I don't often review chapters for novels so my novel ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review. First of all, it is obvious this is a very heartfelt work so I apologize in advance if I come across cold or ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review! Looking at your stats, I can assume you are new to YWS? If you are, congratulations and welcome! If not, I apologize for ...

Hello Lightsong! Luata here for a review, so onward and upward! First off, I have to express that I really enjoyed reading through this poem. This review is more a ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review! I'm sorry if this review comes across a bit harsh, you have a good idea going, but the wording is a bit...awkward. Now ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review! Of course, I'm not entirely sure what context this work was done in but I must disagree with Tab about showing the reader ...

Hello there, Biluata here for a review! I really enjoyed this work but I think that it could use some rewording, so please, allow me. Take or leave my suggestions, ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review! First off, to address what Pernicus stated in the review below, I think you didn't file this piece with the correct tags, I'm ...

I must admit, Pernicus, I was putting off reviewing this piece. For that I apologize. But now I am here to review, so onward and upward! Also, you are a ...

Hello there TwilightMuse, Luata here for a review! First off, I must admit, I really enjoyed reading through this work. Also, reviews are also suggestions, so please, take anything I ...

Hello there, Luata here for a review! I see that felistia caught most of the obvious grammar mistakes that I saw, so thank goodness I get to skip that! Onward ...

Hello there! Luata here for a review and for once, it is going to be grammar based, so I apologize ahead of time for my nitpicks, which tend to annoy ...