Biluata

Good, good, but the last line there, "You don't get much slack when you're a surfing god and study four languages outside of class." Technically if she was a girl ...

Okay, review time. You asked for a brutal review, well I'm not that type of person, but I am extremely picky so here we go on nit picking this poem. ...

Oh the feels. The feels that make me sad . . oh you horrid person, making me sad this late at night, what a great poem! Of course though, this ...

Atta girl! Always be proud of who you are! But of course, in order to make you a review, I have to nit pick the grammar and so on and ...

Oh very clever, very clever indeed. Cynder, this is a very well wrought poem. Okay, I will start with grammar and proceed to ooze praises about the cleverness of this ...

Hello there! I am trying to get a template set up so all this reviewing I hope to do be doing is a little easier, so you get to be ...

Okay then, grammar first. After impulse in the second line, there needs to be a comma. Then there needs to be a comma after gratification at the end of the ...

Hey Lupin! The name I am going by is Biluata which means kitten in Hindu. Just a fun tidbit about myself. I'm not a professional poet writer, I mean, I ...

Hey there! This is a pretty good poem, but to me the rhyme scheme is a little sketchy. The meaning is good, but there are a few things I want ...

Hello, Biluata here. I normally do not review stories that have various chapters, poems are more my pace, but I saw yours has been here for a while so I ...

Birkhoff, this is . .. amazing. I just read your review on another authors work, praising it, so I thought I would return the favor. If I am not mistaken, ...

I didn't see any specific rhyme scheme with this particular work, but as I have said before in almost all of my poetry reviews, it flows nicely off of the ...

Hello! Just me, writing a review. If anyone notices I only review poetry right now, that's because I love these poems, they are all just so good. This poem is ...

Although this poem is short it packs a lot of punch! I have always liked willow trees, they seem to inspire me for some reason. Thank you for writing such ...

This is a very sound article with good advice for writers. Do you mind if I add a few more? Sometimes inspiration is key. You might have a really good ...