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Re: The logic behind Racism.
First of all, can I say for some reason, I love your username! Anyway, Biluata here for a review. I just got done reviewing another work, did a whole really ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: LIFE
Hiya! Biluata here for a review, and since this is the first comment on this piece, I suppose I will do grammar this time instead of the feels. It looks ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Mother Mother
This is so sad! Oh the feels, you hit the nail head on with this poem. It perfectly showed the determination and anguish, as well as the feelings of hopelessness. ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Ink to Paper
Okay, let's give you a second review and get you kicked out of the green room! Oh hi! Biluata here to do a review, and since Mew2x covered grammar, I ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Treat Yer Cowgirls Right
Okay, finally, some more poetry in the green room! Since this is the first comment, I'm gonna start with the feels and then do grammar. I know, the dreaded grammar! ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: Our Death makes us different
Lupin! Long time and no chat. (Makes a sad face) I just reviewed a really sad piece, and it may or may not be hard to see my screen because ...
Apr 8, 2015 -
Re: He tells me stories
Oh my gosh, I think I'm gonna have to be the feels reviewer, because there are to many feels!! (waves hands in the air while running, sobbing in circles from ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1: Alice in Horrorland
Okay honestly, once again, I know I am a horrible person, reviewing a 16+ work and only being 14 and all, but its okay. Honestly a lot of the stuff ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Ascension Chapter 9- The Red Bird
Hello, yes I know, I'm a horrible person, only 14 and reading 16+ work, but alls okay. My reviews are going to be really short for a little bit, I'm ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Physical Violence
A very good piece overall. I'm not going to grammar check because I am sure someone who is better at English than I am will come around to grammar check ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Ordadus- Chapter Six (Part One)
Hello there! Biluata to do this review and I have to warn you, it's going to be majorly long. Why? I ride a bus to school which has a 45 ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Nature the Teacher
i like the juxtaposition you used in this very well written poem. It looks as if grammar is pretty good, the only thing I would say grammar wise is commas, ...
Apr 7, 2015 -
Re: Reverent - Chapter 1.2: Awaken
Okay since everyone seems to really good at grammar all over this site, I think I'm going to start being the feels reviewer, just focusing on the feels! So here ...
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: Flashbacks: Chapter 3
Hey there, Biluata to make a review. Instead of doing any grammar, like I normally do I would like to focus on the feels, the emotions that are portrayed through ...
Apr 6, 2015 -
Re: Regretting Helen
Hey there! I think I may be developing a reputation for being kind of picky about grammar, but AshKitten is better at it than I am, but here we go, ...
Apr 5, 2015
