BiancaLU

Thank you for your review, R2TheR. Thanks for taking the time. I understand what you're saying. I didn't mean for this to be personal piece; therefore, I didn't use anything ...

I appreciate you sharing this, runandhide! Depression is a dark place. I get where you're coming from, this piece might sound a bit like that at the beginning. However, I ...

Thank you ehobby! :) I do tend to milk the moment sometimes. Need to work on that. Thanks.

Hey there, Chrissy321. Your poem is good. On a scale from one to ten, your word usage is probably a seven. It was a bit short, but that shouldn't be ...

Hi, TaliaSankEden. I enjoyed reading this poem. You used a great way to portray depression. I myself am not very fond of the subject, but it does inspire great poetry. ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this poem. It has great word usage and great points. It portrays well the idea you wanted to give off. At least from what I ...

Hello! Just stopping by to say: I absolutely loved your poem! Amazing!!! It really touched me. Keep up the good work. :) BiancaLU

Hi Sleeplessend, thank you!!! :) Good luck on your writing!

Thank you so much, DreamWork!! I appreciate your advice. :) Good luck on your writing.

Thanks a lot! :) And actually, I wrote it in stanzas.. it just didn't let me post it that way.

Hey there SailerGirl. :) I have to say I really liked this poem. It has great impact and illustration. It's a love poem, but not too mushy. Great work! BiancaLU

Hi :) Sorry about your loss. I can only imagine your feelings. But the poem is great. The rhyming certainly adds much color to it. I liked the ideas. Keep ...

Hi Rainn. I really like your poem. It's short and to the point. It has a great construction to it, especially considering how you built idea on top of idea. ...

Hi Big Brother :) Thanks a lot for the advice, it's been a help for my next chapters! Greatly appreciated.

Hey Black! Thank you so much. It's really nice of you, and there is no reason to feel discouraged. I'm sure your writing is great, although I haven't had the ...