BhavyaMehta123

Hi! It is so heart breaking when you design your life with a person and those plans remain a dream forever.But you know what you have a golden heart to ...

Hey there! Here for a quick review. This is a nice poem. I liked your rhyming and how the person who is being talked about can't forget her lover, the ...

Hi@EM16.Honestly, the title was well written. All the emotions of frustration,impatience, sarcasm all could be felt.The eagerness of receiving the message and the disappointment when the reply does no

Hi@CaptainCannon.Welcome to YWS.I hope you have a lovely time here. Each and every line of your poetry is so true and apt! I feel you have raised a issue which ...

Hi@EvaR14.I do not why but I felt emotional reading all this. I know how it feels when you don't share the same relationship with your close friend as you used ...

Hi@PlainandSimple. I feel you have comeback after a break so: Welcome Back. I have read all parts of your story and I feel You had a very painful one. The ...

Hi@DJTurkey.Honestly, I never knew there existed something called" Lai poetry structure" I got to know it from you. So thank you. I liked your poem. I love how you rhymed ...

Hi@silverquill12. This is such a heart touching poem. I love old things their smell, the memories they arouse is the best feeling in the world. Although, I feel nostalgic sometimes ...

Hi@Horisun. This is such a great poem.I love how you explain things are scary outside and risky but one has to be fearless. Honestly, as I was reading it I ...

Hi@Lia5Giba. This is a beautiful piece of work. I can not help reading this again and again.Second and third line of the poem are my favorite lines. I love how ...

Hi@rudrAbhinav bhaiya. The reason I wrote "bhaiya" is because reading all those Indian names I feel either you belong to my own land or have same culture as mine.And you ...

Hi@Hedwiggle. I am here to review this. This is simple, sweet and adorable. I am in love with the bond of KALIA and MAMA. This is kind of relatable to ...

Hi@candywriter. I am here to review your work. I loved this story. As the story started, I had a chill in my spine. As doctor announced Ellie was gone and ...

Hi@Hayley02. Welcome to YWS! You know what you have a golden heart girl! Even if things did not turn out the way you wanted them to, still you respect that ...

Hi@HGsomeone. Honestly, I had no idea about this. Aisle of toilet paper are empty in Australia! This is something shocking and which needs to be addressed. Talking about your piece ...