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BhavyaMehta123

  • Other » Dramatic, Romantic Re: an old suspicious letter

    Hi! This piece broke me to the core. I hope that you are felling better now after pouring your feelings. This was a short piece but had all the potential ...

    May 31, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A day at a time

    Hi! This is a very heart touching piece. I hope you feel better now. Very well written poems with all the emotions : tears, pain, a mess created in life. ...

    May 31, 2020
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Xuang zang

    Hi! This is amazing. These are kind of things which I love reading and enjoy a lot. Thank you for sharing this. The expressions, lesson and the story all were ...

    May 23, 2020
  • Other » Other, General Re: Nature

    Hi! I clicked as fast as I could reading the word nature and went into a different world and smiled throughout as I read your work. This is a beautiful ...

    May 14, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: The Mask We All Wear

    Hi! I feel this is a great poem highlighting a sad truth of today's time. The rhyming, the message everything is just lovely. The poem glides so smoothly leaving readers ...

    May 13, 2020
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Teen Fiction Re: Step One: Ordinary world

    Hi! First of all, welcome to YWS. I hope you have a lovely time here.I liked this short story. Personally, I resonate with you and Nora. I too like mystery ...

    May 11, 2020
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Fear and Confidence

    Hi Lib! This is a nice poem and my first experience on the stage has been like this. Although I gave my speech properly. But, anyways this has been a ...

    May 9, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Rocking Chair

    Hi! Welcome to YWS. I hope you have a lovely time here. This was amazing. Through your work you have proved that, " Everything has life of its own." This ...

    May 5, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Sun and The Moon

    Hi! This is a tragic story. And, this has left me heartbroken. The description of your title attracted me to read it. To start with, this is a well written ...

    May 3, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: That One Day We were in Love

    Hey! First of all, Welcome to YWS. I hope you have a lovely time here. This was a short, sweet and cute little story. I liked it very much. All ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: happier

    Hi! I actually don't know what to say. What I read just now, left me heartbroken. How can someone be like that? But I want to write a review to ...

    Apr 24, 2020
  • Short Story » Literature, General Re: The Seasons

    Hi! This was really good! The personification of all the seasons was done perfectly.I just felt these seasons are your friends whom you are talking to. You are really observant ...

    Apr 22, 2020
  • Other » Spiritual, Other Re: Unseen Scars

    Hi! This is a beautiful piece of work.The idea of breaking stereotype about scars is what I loved the most. Reading this, I assume you have gone through tough times. ...

    Apr 20, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Humor Re: Blood Heist

    Hi! This is a great piece of work and so relatable. Last line of the poem just stands out.I can't stop reading that again and again. Even,In my wildest dreams, ...

    Apr 19, 2020
  • Art » Spiritual, Other Re: Golden Souls

    Hi! Welcome to YWS.I hope you have a wonderful time here.I just loved it. The vocabulary, the message everything is on point. I must say what a start at this ...

    Apr 19, 2020


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