BehindtheMask

Hi Smyli! I'm going to review your poem today. :D Okay. I love your poem. It's sweet, emotional, and I'm sure if your mother read this she would be very ...

Your angelic, soft hair, and your shimmering brown eyes. Your sweet voice, flowing in the air, was what made me realize; There's more to tears than sadness, and there's more ...

I'm speechless. This is truly amazing. You are a gifted writer, and the emotion conveyed in this is just overwhelming. It's a work of art, and you have such an ...

First off, I loved this :D It's an amazing summary of the famous procrastination of a writer. Books litter the floor The swivel chair is piled high with junk Right ...

Hi there! You requested that I review this, and so here I am. Okay. First of all, nice storyline, interesting. But this was very difficult to read and very choppy, ...

Wow. This poem was great! Walking away from this dream. It's too painful to remember, All that meant to be together. I love this stanza. It represents the feelings after ...

Honestly? I liked this. It was refined and well-said. I love your use of words and this stanza: Wish I could put into words How adrenaline beats fast And wipes ...

Wow! I loved the last stanza. It was so perfectly poetic it astounds me. And I adore the title. It's creative and pleasantly unique. Suggestions: I felt myself stranded from ...

Bravo! I absolutely loved this poem. It was heartfelt and sincere and beautiful. It's tragic and true. I’m sorry that I think of you, Here across every night and day. ...

I truly loved this. And I didn't mind the profanity, which is unusual for me in poems. This was extremely emotional. It also hits a soft spot for me because ...

Hi there! I love the imagery in this poem. While quite gruesome and somewhat revolting, the images are very vivid. I especially like, You, the Dead Man with your loose ...

I really enjoyed this poem. It's very beautiful, honest, and sincere. I especially adore the third stanza, The married couple, Fighting all day Stressed about this and that He works ...

Wow! That was truly incredible. This is one of the most attention-grasping stories I've ever read. It's very unique. Now for the close-up :D I'm the Grim Reaper, in case ...

Wow! I did love this. You had some fantastic lines. Especially the first, I have seen a stone statue cry tears of anguish. In fact, the whole first stanza was ...

I loved this! It was beautiful and the images appeared perfectly in my mind. It is truly a masterpiece. One suggestion I can make is, while I loved the use ...