BehindtheMask

Hi Vee! I liked it. For an apocalypse story, very conclusive! Bravo. However, I wish you'd have put your MC's feelings into more detail. You just have your MC in ...

Hi Lele! Well, I sure liked it. It was really interesting, kinda confusing, but nevertheless, interesting. However, you did have quite a few grammatical mistakes, and I'm going to point ...

Hi Snoink! First, I was drawn to this poem by the intriguing title. I mean, who wouldn't want to read something titled 'A Lesson in Dying'? (XD) Yet I found ...

Simple, yet mysteriously complex. I love it, VEE. Bravo. Love, lies. Wishes, whys. Good job :) Though, I think it would be AH-MAY-ZING if, since you capitalized every other line, ...

A letter to yourself. Wow, Matt, your writing continues to amaze me! It's extremely well-written, and laced through with emotion and secrecy. It's great because it's one of those inner-battle ...

Hello! The poem read very smoothly, the flow was beautiful. The imagery you display is very vivid, I can feel the frigid wind on my face, and the warmth of ...

Hi Delanie :) Honestly, I like it. I think it's good, and relatable, but I'm sorry to say I agree with Tori on some parts. If you don't want the ...

I like this poem. It shows many different things in a few words, and though it's very fast-moving and jumps from sentence to sentence, I think if you tried to ...

Wow! I really enjoyed this one. It's not exactly poetic, but very to the point and true and something everyone who writes in a journal can relate to. I love ...

Hello, FLyerS. I am going to review your poem. First off, I like the change from innocence into darkness. It's pretty interesting. But, when you do this, you have no ...

Why hello, my fellow friend and writer. I shall review your poem today. First things first: Dripping from my mouth, Splashing all around. I cover my lips with smeared fingers ...

Wow! Again, MissRockers, you astound me with your amazing writing ability. I think what makes this poem so great is that it tells all the truths of friendship, the ups ...

HI! I'm BehindtheMask and I'm going to review your poem today. I think this poem is very emotionally powerful and very grasping. The rhyme scheme fits is beautifully and is ...

Wow! That was great! Your rhythm was fantastic and it flowed off the tongue perfectly. It reads like a poem should :D Also, the emotion is very prominent and I'm ...

Uh.... not really sure what to think of this one. First of all, I think your description is very unappealing to your readers. Perhaps you should change it. I was ...