Basil

Hey Deanie, thought I'd give you a review. This poem is wonderful, very captivating and full of emotion. It is easy to picture what you have written, the images are ...

Hello Roundsquare!! I'm happy to say I enjoyed this! And yeah, my suspicions were right. I've read this chapter before. I think. Either way, I love it ^^ Your style ...

Hello LemisaLeaZeor!! I'm here to review! It's been a while, so I may be a little rust, sorry ^//^ I'll start with the praise :3 This is well written, and ...

*Throws confetti* I have a surprise!! A review! What this needs is the Meow Meow Meow Kitty Song playing in the background, and then it'll be even better. There are ...

Hello DragonLily, *Blushes* My Box Exercise inspired you to write this?! It's beautiful!! It captured my interest straight away! Not once did my attention linger! The start is simple but ...

Hey Laure I love this! It shows just how frustrating inspiration can be, and when you want to write and nothing happens, you get angry. You've captured the feelings well. ...

I'm totally stolen for words at how amazing this piece is!!! And it's exactly what I'd like too!! Haha ^^ There isn't anything wrong here that I can nitpick at. ...

Hey guys! First up, you've spelt possibilities wrong. 5 times. And dieing should be dying. put a space between no and more on the eight line. On the tenth line, ...

Heyo! Basil here to review Ok, at first, I found the setting out of the verses a little confusing, and then I got the feel of it. The words have ...

Heya! Basil here to review :P That is amazing!!! The title is not only eye catching, but the first few sentences draw you in. I was totally engrossed, and when ...

Oh wow!! I haven't read any novels/stories based in an asylum ... seen a couple of horror movies though ;) *cough cough* Grave Encounters. Anyway, I love it! I want ...

Hey SecreteJournalist! That was just ... wow! I love it! You have the anger captivated well, and the sadness. You've got it all written beautifully!! I just have to say ...

Wow!! emjayc, that was amazing! I love it! You have done an amazing job of writing this!! It is sad, but there doesn't seem to be any sadness in the ...

Me again! I ... Well, it is written well. And the words are put together well. I don't really know what to say ... but I will say that, once ...

Well hello!! We meet again! I must admit ... it was a little confusing, but I still love it! Very cryptic indeed! And I feel a lot of sadness there, ...