BaByLa1989

i love this piece.... keep writing, keep up the good work :D

I'm not trying to be bias or anything but I don't think this poem deserves all the credits that it's getting. I love the way the writer used personification to ...

i must say i love this poem, there is a perfect flowing story with a moral lesson to be learnt. Very inspiring. I like the imagery you used to paint ...

I love this piece. it reminds me of the Africa slaves that was brought to the Caribbean. also my interpretation is that its symbolic for someone who is forced to ...

* I miss the way you made me smile, the way i felt perfectly in your arms i liked that you could have made me cry yet i loved you ...

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Hi good day i'm BabyLa1989 and i would be doing your review today. first, your title prepositions or conjunctions of 4 letters or fewer should not be capitalized unless they ...

I must say that this is a well written paper. However All nouns, pronouns, verbs, adverbs, and adjectives should be capitalized. Good job! Your usage of transitional phrases is within ...

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A good title should contain more than one word. there were a few spelling errors and incorrect word choices, for example "woolworths nrhinestones, diamond earrings" should be Woolworth rhinestone, dia

A good title should contain more than one word. great job on your choices of words. Good job! Your usage of transitional phrases.Excellent work! Your usage of sophisticated words is ...

i like it, i understand the concept but there were no rhythm...

this piece have potential re-read and elaborate and hopefully you would lengthen your piece. i was a bit confused while reading this and did not find the true meaning to ...