BEASTtheHUN

I like the direction you are going with this story, it is very interesting. The dialogue is pretty good, and the characterization is good. The one quibble I had with ...

Dude, you got a way of captivating me, a little long, but who gives a flying flip. The description is amazing, and this is one of the first times I ...

Okay man, you got a lot of work to do! Just kidding, the only work you have to do is write the next chapter and tagging me on it. That's ...

I like this chapter a lot. Almost just as much as the first one. I emphasize almost. Still, nonetheless, let's get to it. The characterization is incredible. I get the ...

Number one tag me on the next chapter it's a must. Wo I really liked this. There is not one critique I can give you at all, well maybe one. ...

Okay, so I gotta be brutally honest, I am not going to sugarcoat. You did sign up for this though. Please by no means take this offensively, and by no ...

Okay, I like the characterization in this text, it's very vivid. I get the many different personalities. The thing that I would say is that the flow is just a ...

Hmm, I like this text. It's full of raw emotions and is somewhat realistic. I have never actually watched glee (it is fr girls isn't it), but I will tell ...

I really like this chapter, or part, whatever. Anyway, the imagery is good, I can envision this in my head right now, and that's a good sign. I like the ...

Wo, okay, this is really good. It is very engaging and captivating. I can imagine every detail in vivid imagery, and that is the sign of a good writer. The ...

I am going to be brutally honest with you right now, you did sign up for this though. Please, by no means am I trying to be offensive, I just ...

This is a nice chapter, size does not matter, content does, and the content here is very nice. This is my first time reading, so I have some catching up ...

I like this story a lot so far. The flow is absolutely flawless. It moves it at a very good pace. The descriptive imagery is breathtaking. The hook is just ...

I like the beginning of this story, the end seems a little rushed though, which doesn't really help with the flow. I like how you highlighted the character of Noah. ...

Wo, I really like this poem, makes you really think. I like how you kind of compared it to a snail. When I first read your title, I thought, little ...