Awsomesauseness

WOW!! I absolutely loved all the description in this work. I loved everything . the title really intrigued me and made me want to click and read. once I read ...

Heyy Awsomesauseness here for a review.:) OK I got the gist of what you were meaning in this poem. children are not children after they have done the dirty deed. ...

this poem is short and sweet just the way I like em. I love this poem. it shows how (pardon my French) shitty people in society can just turn the ...

ok. I see a lot of hate in this toward her. I think you need to lengthen it. put in like how these represent what she thinks of you. like ...

Awsomesauseness here for a review :) First off wonderful. Great detail and excellent use of imagery to the poem. I think that at the beginning: But I lent It to ...

Cool. Um its good. I didn't understand it though. I tried to figure out what it was about when you put Why do your large hands Gently cover mine, A ...

WOW! Really a great poem. I really enjoyed it. it pulled me into read more and I love how (correct me if im wrong) its about suicide. lots of kids ...

Unbelievable. First of all great poem I really like all of it. the use of all of the description in this makes it wonderful to read and i really enjoyed ...

Holy shit What a great poem I am so pulled in to this poem its just that beautiful Everything about this poem just screams how pist you are Unbelievable and ...

Hmm I think its virus or disease? Well done poem. it left me wondering. it could only be so many things. I love the way it rhymed. And it being ...

Ok so it was good for being your first. I am not one to judge so ill make it short and sweet, for me it was hard to follow and ...

It is a great story but I wished that you had gone on to explain what god did with Luna. Overall the poem was emotional. It was sad but also ...

I love it. it could not be more settle yet beautiful. It shows all of the perfect quality's of a rose and its just a very beautiful poem. I love ...

Wow sabrina when I actually sat down and read it, it was actually quite amazing. I really do like it. Keep going sis I think you are doing good and ...