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Re: U and I. U is my beloved love and I is the desperate me in love.
Heyy! Awru here to review your work. I kinda enjoyed this poem. Its def a unique concept of maintaining a same monotonous tone through out and repeating the same thought ...
Jul 4, 2020 -
Re: Amber Eyes
Hey! Awru here to review your work. I really enjoyed reading this piece. It was short and simple and really drove home a warm feeling. I think it was really ...
Jul 3, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 1: The Aftermath of War [Her Feathers of Grief & Darkness]
Heeyyy! Awru here to review your work. First off, I really really enjoyed reading it. The vivid descriptions, the emotions, the dialogues and the story itself all is wonderful. I ...
Jul 2, 2020 -
Re: log 2- Lany Evergale
Helloo! Awru here to review you work. First off I really enjoy the diary like feel of this novel. You were able to convey it in a really solid way. ...
Jul 1, 2020 -
Re: Story IIII - Stained Glass Windows
Salutations! Awru here to rescue your story from the Green room. I haven't reviewed in quite some time so imma rusty. First of all, I really enjoyed reading this piece. ...
Jun 22, 2020 -
Re: Lockdown Part 5
Salutations! Awru here to review. I can't believe I am actually reviewing. I don't review anymore like at all bcz of some impenetrable reasons even I can't understand. But your ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: Chapter 8: Fireball
I just melted into a puddle of idiotic happiness after reading this chap for some obv reasons. I would say tis chap was beautiful and by far your best chapters. ...
Aug 22, 2019 -
Re: A Paragon of The Living, Almost
Hullo!! Awu here to rescue this story from the green room. I havent reviwed for a while so am pretty rusty. First off i really enjoyed this. It was a ...
Aug 22, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 9
Haalluu!! I finally got the time to rescue my little dragon frens. I must say spot on hunting scene,there was a lot of suspense and tension in it which basically ...
Aug 15, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 7: Experiment
I can't believe its still in the green room. Absolutely outrageous!! So I am here to rescue it. First of all this chap was mostly based on descriptions of different ...
Aug 12, 2019 -
Re: Least Romantic: Chapter Nine: Kiss
Tiana you little...........I have a lot of things o say for her. But swearing isn't appreciated here. I bet she framed Henry. I bet she told Henry if he did ...
Aug 9, 2019 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 24
Avace is her Blood name. OMG!!! This story just got intersting by ten thousand folds. How do u doo it gurl!! First of all you described kkachis emotions so welll. ...
Aug 9, 2019 -
Re: Least Romantic: Chapter Eight: Friends Turned Enemies
Whhaattt!! That was super abrupt. You just jumped straight into the next day without any account of other events taking place in between. That disrupted the flow a bit. And ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: A Fight for Survival ~ Darkness Approaches Chapter 8
Hullo!! Its me the one the only Awruuuuu. I am really happy you showed us this fatherly aspect of Venom's personality. I think it was important that bottling up emotions ...
Aug 7, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 6: Contract
Hullo!! I saw you in the online section and decided to check the cool username and OMG Alan Walker!!! Anyway i just speed through your novel and i must say ...
Aug 2, 2019
