Good Morning/Afternoon/Evening/Night(whichever one it is in your part of the world),
And we continue. Also on a side note: you're chapter titles are pretty good.
First Impression: Well interesting chapter there again. I like how this chapter had more character development than backstory. There's a much better flow and overall balance to the story when it's done that way.
Anyway let's get to it,
The gentle pinpricks of white paint, the smooth lines that create the trees that are both perfect yet imperfect, the graceful sweep of the horizon, the powerful ball of flames that rises from the shimmering black water, it all captivates me. I could almost feel the artist in the piece, a lonely soul who just wanted to give something to the world. The way the trees stand out starkly against the stars, branches reaching for each other… I feel their longing. The fireball catches one of the leaves, and embers shoot to the sky, glowing, almost pulsing, frozen in time—
Well that's some amazing description right there. And as a bonus you get a sense of her personality as an artist.
"Hi. I, um, forgot the way to the bathroom, and then, well…" I wave my hands at the painting.
Well she forgot that really fast.
Right in front of me is a bath, about the size of a medium-sized pool, steps leading down to the stark white tub that is embedded in the floor.
That is definitely very big.
"Seriously, Kyre, we need to get food. Soon." I look at the large wall clock hanging above the doorless kitchen entrance. 6:00.
She's doing a bit too much ordering around considering she literally got there a few hours ago.
"For one," I reply, gesticulating vaguely with my hands, "Ramen is unhealthy. The packets you use are the instant ones, right? The number of preservatives in them, as well as the processing the noodles went through, is incredibly unhealthy. For another, I'm vegan, and that bowl you gave me earlier smelled like shrimp. So where is the nearest grocery store?"
So there were no improvements in the past...uhh I don't know how many years. Also didn't she pick up ramen herself earlier. Were those vegan?
He shakes his head. "The Government isolated this area from the rest of society to preserve the last remaining houses from the past century. Boss only lives here because she likes the grandness of the house and the quietness of the forest nearby. There's only one way out: an old escape tunnel used by Government fugitives. It's protected with a Level Four security code that I--" He hesitates briefly, then continues. "Uh, someone I know hacked for me." Now he's tapping his fingers restlessly on the counter on either side of him.
Well that should have set off a red flag for Ashe.
I reach out and hold his hands, my warm fingers covering his cool ones in what I hope is a reassuring way.
"I'll come with you, then."
Looks like we have a journey ahead of us then.
And that's it for this one.
Overall: Shows a bit of a tentative friendship developing. Maybe. And we learn a bit about this Boss. So far I'm not sure whether to hate her or like her. She seems ambiguous so far. Let's see if that changes in the chapters to come. Also can these two just walk out without telling Boss?
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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