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  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: break

    Hi, I really loved not only your poem, but the artistic elements and how you presented it. Although it was pretty short, you were able to convey a great deal ...

    Aug 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Scroll That is History

    I really, really love this. First of all, your rhyme scheme and the rhythm is amazing. However, the final line "Only many shades of grey" seems a tiny bit too ...

    Aug 17, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Falling

    Honestly, I'm not sure where to begin because this is just incredible. You've created such rich and violent imagery, and filled this poem with so much pain and emotion. It ...

    Aug 14, 2021
  • Short Story » Health, Narrative Re: When did I Learn?

    I know I'm a bit late to be posting a review, but when I read this...just wow. I can't say I relate to everything here...but a lot of it if ...

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: partial oddities

    It's not often I read something and I'm so totally drawn into it. I'm not even sure where to begin in this review because every bit of this felt like ...

    Aug 13, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Unnamed

    This is such a beautiful and elegant poem ^-^ I really loved the way it flows from word to word, from line to line, and I especially loved your word ...

    Nov 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Chasing Sunsets

    Wow, I really loved this poem and your use of imagery was amazing, not just of the sunset, but of the feelings the viewer has. I really liked a lot ...

    Nov 22, 2020
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: just eat

    This was really beautiful and I really appreciate you challenging the ideas that many people have of what's healthy and what's not and the way our society often views eating ...

    Nov 19, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Upon Reading Old Poetry

    This. Is. Exactly. What. It. Feels. Like. You perfectly captured the feelings I get when I reread my old poetry. I'm embarrassed I was ever that bad and I'm proud ...

    Nov 18, 2020
  • Poetry » Science, Realistic Re: corners of the universe

    This poem is just stunning and the background fits the aesthetic perfectly. I really reading it and I can honestly relate to the theme, that feeling of wanting to find ...

    Nov 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Alone

    This is such a great poem. I love how it captures the feeling of longing for a life so unlike what we have and how it expresses that feeling of ...

    Nov 9, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: A Writer

    This is beautiful and I really think it captures the beauty of writing.

    Nov 8, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Spiritual Re: ~

    This just stunning. It's such a beautiful, sweet poem that perfectly captures the love a mother has for her child. Not going to lie, I teared up a bit reading ...

    Nov 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: I'll Never Forget

    Wow, this was a really beautiful and really powerful poem. I love the theme of remembering people, of remembering our experiences with them, no matter what, even if it hurts. ...

    Nov 8, 2020
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: maybe I'm a fish that needs to learn to fly.

    Wow, I loved this! To be honest, I don't totally understand it, but I love the abstract conflict between the want to be a star or a fish and going ...

    Nov 8, 2020


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